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It's all downhill from here...

Postby PiroStitch on Tue May 24, 2005 2:15 pm

Here's probably the best photo I took from a downhill mountain bike racing event. :)

Will post the rest up eventually.

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Postby leek on Tue May 24, 2005 2:58 pm

Wow... that's a pretty impressive action shot... It looks great...
The white tape spoils it a bit, but it's probably too much to clone out...

What effect did you use to get that look to the photo? It almost looks like a watercolour...
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Postby Greg B on Tue May 24, 2005 2:59 pm

Fantastic shot Piro, action, excitement, it has it all. You've even managed to capture the concentration in the rider's eys. Well done.
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Postby PiroStitch on Tue May 24, 2005 3:01 pm

No effect or photoshop work ;) It's all done in camera. I had added USM and adjusted levels a bit but it seems to have been removed from the resize :S
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue May 24, 2005 3:10 pm

Piro - you are a nutcase - that pic would have been excellent for the comp :roll: :roll: :roll:
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Postby leek on Tue May 24, 2005 3:11 pm

PiroStitch wrote:No effect or photoshop work ;) It's all done in camera.


In that case - WOW!!!
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Postby Glen on Tue May 24, 2005 3:13 pm

Piro, absolutely great shot
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Postby yeocsa on Tue May 24, 2005 3:13 pm

Superb Action Shot. Well done.

Can you share how you did it.

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Postby MHD on Tue May 24, 2005 3:15 pm

Indeed... I hope this was taken before the comp started... You could be missing out on a d70s!

And if it was not... Then I cant wait to see the one you didnt post and have in keeping for the comp!


Awesome shot! This is worth money... I hope you sold it to the rider or company...
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Postby PiroStitch on Tue May 24, 2005 3:15 pm

sirhc55 wrote:Piro - you are a nutcase - that pic would have been excellent for the comp :roll: :roll: :roll:


Yeh I considered that but oh well :) It's not really a decisive moment :)
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Postby MHD on Tue May 24, 2005 3:16 pm

If my bike were flying through the air like that I'd damn well call it descisive!
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Postby mic on Tue May 24, 2005 3:24 pm

Thats damn impressive Wayne, :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:

Please tell how you achieved such a shot, you could sell that to a Mag.

Well done.

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Postby Geoff on Tue May 24, 2005 3:26 pm

Fantastic shot!! :) Well done!! Some EXIF data would be great!
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Postby wendellt on Tue May 24, 2005 3:34 pm

WooHooo! Kick ASS shot!

what kind of gear did you use to take it?
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Postby PiroStitch on Tue May 24, 2005 3:38 pm

Not entirely sure on the exact exif. will check when I get home.

Shutter was 1/80
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The gear I had was D70, SB800, Manfrotto tripod :)

Thanks for the great comments everyone :) Much appreciated.

Mic, it's all about panning and zooming the lens at the same time :)
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Postby flipfrog on Tue May 24, 2005 4:13 pm

frigin awesome shot!

i really like the angle you found
top notch shot imo
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Postby MattC on Tue May 24, 2005 4:27 pm

Holy moly, that made my head swim.

That is brilliant. It says one thing very loudly to me... action!

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Postby Alex on Tue May 24, 2005 9:00 pm

Wayne,

This shot is outstanding!! I'm speachless. I agree with Chris - you are a nutcase :lol:

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Postby BBJ on Tue May 24, 2005 9:04 pm

Piro, This is a top shot with great pp work, looks unreal you have done well. What can i say print and frame it mate, looks bloody unreal.
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Postby Frankenstein on Tue May 24, 2005 9:09 pm

Piro,
that's one of the best action/sports shots I've ever seen. Incredible.

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Postby PiroStitch on Wed May 25, 2005 12:28 am

:shock: Thanks for all the positive comments everyone. I know the photo was great, but not THAT great :oops:

Gives me more to think about in terms of attending these downhill events :D

Ok proper Exif info:

Make - NIKON CORPORATION
Model - NIKON D70

ExposureTime - 1/60 seconds
FNumber - 6.30
ExposureProgram - Manual control
MeteringMode - Center weighted average
FocalLength - 35 mm
White Balance - AUTO
Image Sharpening - NONE
Focus Mode - AF-C
Flash Setting - REAR
Flash Mode - Built-in,TTL
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Postby marcus on Wed May 25, 2005 12:42 am

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, my son saw me checking this out and said "Dad did you take that" I obviously said: "Yeah do you think it's cool?" I don't think I looked too convincing and he said "You really did'nt take that shot did you Dad" I looked at him and said "No, but I could have"..........he did'nt believe me. :cry:
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Postby PiroStitch on Wed May 25, 2005 12:45 am

Lol thanks Marcus :) You would've had to convince your son that you actually woke up at 7 in the morning, drive for about an hour and a half, hike up a mountain track and set up the shot :P
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Postby marcus on Wed May 25, 2005 1:01 am

Hey Piro.........he knows I would'nt do that on a Saturday (him and his brother have Soccer). He also knows I would'nt do that on a Sunday (cause I'm in bed!!). Cheeky bugga that kid of mine!
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Postby NetMagi on Wed May 25, 2005 3:52 am

awesome shot. . I used to read a lot of the mtn bike rags when I was younger, and this is probably one of the best if not THE BEST bike action pic I've ever seen


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Postby Catcha on Wed May 25, 2005 4:20 am

Very nice...was it the effect that you wanted or were you just experimenting ?
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Postby dooda on Wed May 25, 2005 4:44 am

This is better than most magazine shots I see. Truly terrific. I think that you should crop a little off the right hand to give more space in front of the rider. Plus the left hand side is more dramatic where the right hand side isn't.
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Postby ozimax on Wed May 25, 2005 11:19 am

Out-bloomin'-standin' shot, amazing stuff is all I can say. There are millions of action shots out there, this one stands out. Well done. I especially like the fact that you can see the riders eyes.

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Postby PiroStitch on Fri May 27, 2005 1:42 am

Bloody webhosts! My old one went down on me for the last time! The photo is now back up at a new home :)

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Postby MATT on Fri May 27, 2005 6:29 am

Awsome shot Piro

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Postby KerryPierce on Fri May 27, 2005 8:29 am

Very cool shot, Piro. 8)
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Postby flipfrog on Fri May 27, 2005 10:09 am

easy week for moderator picking POTW :wink:
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Postby stubbsy on Fri May 27, 2005 11:34 am

Piro

This would have to be one of the best action shots I've seen. You should be extremely happy with this. Do you have others to share, or is this the only one that you were happy with?
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Postby PiroStitch on Fri May 27, 2005 11:39 am

Hi stubbsy,

I do have others but a bit worried to show them as I would like to enter it for the comp. :)

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Postby stubbsy on Fri May 27, 2005 11:41 am

PiroStitch wrote:Hi stubbsy,

I do have others but a bit worried to show them as I would like to enter it for the comp. :)

Cheers,

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Cool

That makes sense Wayne, just don't tell anyone OK :wink:
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Postby sirhc55 on Fri May 27, 2005 11:47 am

PiroStitch wrote:
sirhc55 wrote:Piro - you are a nutcase - that pic would have been excellent for the comp :roll: :roll: :roll:


Yeh I considered that but oh well :) It's not really a decisive moment :)


Depends Piro on which angle you take on the decisive moment - does the moment apply to the photographer or the subject :wink:

With this pic, IMO, you have captured 2 decisive moments - yours and his :wink:
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Postby PiroStitch on Fri May 27, 2005 12:46 pm

Don't tell me that Chris :P D'oh!!!! :evil:
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Postby mudder on Fri May 27, 2005 8:05 pm

WOW! That would have to be one of the best action pics I've seen in a long time... I tips my hat to ya Piro, that's an absolute belter!
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Postby whiz on Sun May 29, 2005 11:46 am

It took a while, but when you mentioned zooming and panning at the same time, I realised that is what you did.
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Postby kurokaze204 on Fri Jun 03, 2005 10:30 am

Amazing Shot Piro. I don't know whether to be encouraged that I guessed how you did it or discouraged because I know I still wouldn't be able to get a shot like that anyway :)

Just a matter of 8 or 9 years practice I guess. I knew I should have gone for mountain bike tickets at the Comm Games!! :(
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Postby blacknstormy on Fri Jun 03, 2005 7:52 pm

I'm :mrgreen: with envy!!!! Amazing!
Fantastic photo Piro! Can I ask what lens you were using???
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Postby Matt. K on Fri Jun 03, 2005 9:06 pm

Outstanding action shot...and I don't mind the white tape at all. This image is of a professional standard in every way and could easily win a major prize for this type of imagery. Now...was it a fluke? or could you do it again? :lol:
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Postby bender on Sat Jun 04, 2005 1:34 am

great shot... l like the whole thing... wow :shock:
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