mickeyjuice wrote:[No actual points,
With all due respect, I firstly referred to the piss-poor mis-statement regarding aperture that had already been quoted, and then proceeded to list, explicitly, not one, not two, but THREE errors of fact that he had written in just the first three paragraphs. You'll note that those are annotated with the strike one, strike two etc comments.
No actual points? Go back and read my words, please.
It's not how you'd write it. I get that. Bad luck. He probably didn't have forever to write it,
You have no idea if that's true, or not.
Regardless, it's irrelevant. He's supposed to be a professional. Being a professional entails taking some responsibility and pride in your work. It's that simple. Being under pressure is, precisely, a part of being a professional. If you can't take the heat, then get out of the bloody kitchen.
I've had to write, and sometimes rewrite, parts of a book just days before publication. Yes, that's pressure too. Big bloody deal: it's a part of life, so deal with it. I certainly don't have forever to write the stuff I write, but I'll be damned if I'm going to turn in shit.
Again, being a professional means having a professional attitude: we once fired a guitarist from a band because he couldn't be bothered turning up for gigs in time to get set up for those gigs. Again, this was an example of unprofessional behaviour. I have fired photographers because they got drunk while shooting a wedding. One even rolled his car on the way home. In one word: unprofessional.
And a journalist turning in a story that's inadequately researched, full of holes and inaccuracies is equally unprofessional.
If I have unprofessional people working with me, that affects my reputation; it makes me look bad. You may be satisfied with unprofessional attitudes and behaviour; I am not. never have been, and never will be.
Let's go this way: why in the world should I be expected to accept substandard workmanship? Let's forget this article for a moment, and talk about something else: would you accept poorly prepared food in a restaurant? How about a plumber who, in fixing your cistern, floods the whole bloody bathroom? A gardner who, while mowing the lawn, cuts down your prize roses? Dealing with a camera store whose staff know fuck-all about photography?
Is there a difference? Absobloodylutely not!
What on earth is wrong with having a commitment to excellence? I would contend that too many people do not have this commitment, and stories such as this load of rubbish are the result.
I see no reason to accept a fourth rate product, and this story is just that: no excellence, no accuracy, just excuses and crap.
Most writers are under significant time-pressure, and they don't write how everyone wants them to write. Again, bad luck.
it's one thing to be writing under pressure. it happens all the time, and it's a part of life. Big deal.
That someone writes in a manner that doesn't please somebody is simply not the issue. It's avoiding the fact that this so-called journalist has failed to be professional in so many ways. I have already illustrated how one section could have been easily rewritten to be more accurate, and it would have taken just seconds to do.
Oh yes, and a dash of professionalism on the part of the author.
I probably don't use the words they'd like, either. Bad luck for them, too.)
Again, it's not just a matter of the words that you write: it's what those words mean, and it's how you communicate, in a clear and concise manner, an accurate message.
And surely, that is what writing is all about?
Especially for a professional.