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....now I think this is an improvement......

Postby big pix on Sat Aug 20, 2005 4:11 am

....magic wand and extract tool used along with an alfa channel, also with some blur on the alfa channel.....

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had to crop the bottom of the flower as I forgot to leave in the stork......
I am blaming it on the Stella......':P'
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Postby big pix on Sat Aug 20, 2005 4:22 am

.....sorry the Stella is kicking in......forgot to add that I also added a curve to the background and a gradient to make the plain blue sky, top to botton, go dark to light......I think this helps......yes the Stella....
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Postby gstark on Sat Aug 20, 2005 8:47 am

Nice, and great detail on the petals.

I'd have preferred this in a portrait orientation, though; that's what the image seems to be calling for to me.
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Postby big pix on Sat Aug 20, 2005 9:01 am

.....blame it on the Stella.....':P'
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Postby Paul on Sat Aug 20, 2005 9:56 am

Reminds me of "The day of the Triffids" :D
Gorgeous yellows in the middle, I would like to see the sky a bit more saturated to see the difference if possiable.
Can you also decrease the size of the 35mm border tractor holes?
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Postby big pix on Sat Aug 20, 2005 5:25 pm

.....after the Stella Mmmmm......

.....Gary tried the Portrait, and you get 1/3 flower 2/3/sky not really a good look.......

.....Paul, the 35mm frame is what it would be if you enlarged it on your scanner, i.e.: all in correct proportion......

.....Also forgot to add that the post processing was done on a 12inch powermac using PSCS2.......and here is the original if you missed my other post.....

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Postby PiroStitch on Sat Aug 20, 2005 6:02 pm

Yeah it's a slight improvement :twisted: Heheh I love being a cheeky bugger :P Great PP work BP ;)
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Postby stubbsy on Sat Aug 20, 2005 10:06 pm

BP - this shows the power of PP beautifully (which it is!)
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Postby Slider on Sun Aug 21, 2005 12:30 am

Great stuff BP. That is a great improvement. Very nicely done.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Aug 21, 2005 12:39 am

WOW!

I just finished installed PSCS2, and I can say I'm inspired by seeing what you've done. Can I ask how long you have spent on PP to make this amazing transformation occur.

Great stuff!
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Postby big pix on Sun Aug 21, 2005 2:33 am

...... the above took about 20-30 minutes but I was following a tutorial in Russell Brown's book, it comes with a c.d. of videos and I can say it is one of the best tutorials that I have, I have done this again with 2 other images and it took about 15 minutes, when you have time have a look at this site, there is something there for everyone.......

http://www.russellbrown.com/tips_tech.html
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Aug 21, 2005 10:21 pm

Thanks! I don't think I'm quiet ready for that sort of PS work, but I'll bookmark that site for later reference (out of interest, have you posted your other PS shots ?).
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Postby Big V on Sun Aug 21, 2005 10:55 pm

Fantastic transformation, very stylish..well done
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Postby big pix on Mon Aug 22, 2005 7:27 pm

......thank you all for your kind comments........ as you know I am not new to photography, but new to digital, D70 for about 18 months and new to Photoshop CS about 14 months and PSCS2 for around 3 months......and the digital darkroom has been a great learning curve, with printing and PP with PSCS2, I try and learn something new with Photoshop every day......and I like to share my learning experience......
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