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Postby flipfrog on Mon Sep 19, 2005 3:42 pm

<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/deesignphotography/44580264/" title="Photo Sharing"><img src="http://static.flickr.com/32/44580264_d2690cfa73_b.jpg" width="1024" height="630" alt="red passion" /></a>
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Sep 19, 2005 3:46 pm

Things that lept out to me in this phot, Red red rose, white white teeth, and then strangely facial hair. Interesting shot, not sure it entirely works for me, but I do like the red/white colours of the rose, lips and teeth.
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Postby PiroStitch on Mon Sep 19, 2005 3:48 pm

Very sharp and detailed :)

Is that the tooth or a marble or some weird white bubble in the right person's mouth?
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Sep 19, 2005 3:52 pm

Maybe it's a tongue ring ? It does seem a little odd doesn't it.
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Sep 19, 2005 5:19 pm

Dee

About bloody time. First time I can categorically describe one of your images as good rather than great. There's hope for me yet :wink:
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Postby pippin88 on Mon Sep 19, 2005 6:36 pm

I think it's a tongue ring.

Dee, I can see where you were going with this shot, but it doesn't quite reach your normal (excellent) standard.

Can't really pinpoint exactly what detracts. Maybe little things like the strange tooth / tongue ring.
The woman on the lefts mouth being a bit OOF is a bit distracting for me.

The colours are great.
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Postby flipfrog on Tue Sep 20, 2005 4:22 am

was just playin around at my cousins wedding///


and yeah, that's a tongue piercing :P
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