Keeping flora on the agenda (5 images)

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Keeping flora on the agenda (5 images)

Postby krpolak on Tue Sep 20, 2005 9:41 pm

Few recent images. Personally I liked them due to simplicity, simplicity and simplicity. Minimal post work. Any comments and impresions are welcome :)

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Postby mic on Tue Sep 20, 2005 9:52 pm

Brilliant & Brilliant !

Very nice colours & Crisp as :wink:

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Postby Slider on Tue Sep 20, 2005 10:09 pm

Very nice. Really like the simplicity of the 4th shot.
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Sep 20, 2005 10:24 pm

Krystian

These are all excellent and have much stronger appeal for me than your architectural shots.
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Postby krpolak on Tue Sep 20, 2005 10:28 pm

Thanks guys for comments. Appreciate that.


stubbsy

These are all excellent and have much stronger appeal for me than your architectural shots


Nature is the finest architect. I only released a shutter :)

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Postby redpoppy on Tue Sep 20, 2005 10:39 pm

I particularly liked the third image. The abstract quality of the photo appealed to me. The strong directional lines of the veins wihin the shapes of the leaf are quite lovely and I also liked the contrast of the shadow. A nice balance.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Sep 21, 2005 10:39 am

Krystian a nice collection of shots. By far my favourites are #1 and #3 and I think it's mainly due to the abstract nature (excuse the pun) captured in both. I'm not sure but it might also have to do with the subject filling the entire frame which #1 and #3 both have in common.
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Postby wendellt on Wed Sep 21, 2005 10:47 am

Excellent composition on 1 and 3 and the use of a dark background to isolate the main subject.
Individually I think the weakest one is the ferns where is too much going on, but in the set adds a nice contrast to the minimalism of the others
Krystian looks like the light is natural but the background is dark, may i ask how you achieved this?
Very thoughtful and well planned out photography
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Postby krpolak on Wed Sep 21, 2005 10:49 am

Alpha_7,

Or maybe because of different light character. Notice that both images show subject as it would lay on lightbox. Plus both of them are kind of close up, at least much more then others. We can see leaves structure. That differes them form other images, where there is more space. Together it creates interesting illumination :)

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Postby krpolak on Wed Sep 21, 2005 10:53 am

Wendellt,

Thanks. Black background is effect of strong contrast. Plants are directly illuminated by the Sun where as background sits in deep shadow. Difference is at least few serious stops. On top of that add low camera dynamic range and then something must be placed out of it, which in this case is bakcground :)

If you will take carefull look at the last images, you will see, on the right, hint of a hedge behind.

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Postby wendellt on Wed Sep 21, 2005 11:18 am

krpolak wrote:Wendellt,

Thanks. Black background is effect of strong contrast. Plants are directly illuminated by the Sun where as background sits in deep shadow. Difference is at least few serious stops. On top of that add low camera dynamic range and then something must be placed out of it, which in this case is bakcground :)

If you will take carefull look at the last images, you will see, on the right, hint of a hedge behind.

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Ah high fstop, very smart, I thought you mocked up some black background backdrop out on location.
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