B+W grass trees (black boys) 2 images

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B+W grass trees (black boys) 2 images

Postby Willy wombat on Sun Aug 20, 2006 10:27 pm

Interested to hear your opinions on these 2 images

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Wasnt sure if i should lighten the sky or not?
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Postby sheepie on Sun Aug 20, 2006 11:06 pm

Hi Willy - sorry, but these don't look right in B&W. If you absolutely HAVE to have one, then I'd pick the second, and wouldn't do anything more with the sky. BUT they really need to be in colour!
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Postby Willy wombat on Mon Aug 21, 2006 12:09 am

Cheers - Will post the colour versions tomorrow.
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Postby Willy wombat on Mon Aug 21, 2006 10:05 pm

Here are the colour versions for you to compare. Im still waiting to hear what people think about the first lot (Sheepie excluded).


[img]http://www.fototime.com/{1C1611BA-597B-480B-B5C4-01C482B147CF}/picture.JPG[/img]


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Postby Justin on Mon Aug 21, 2006 10:09 pm

#1 I like in black and white but even more contrast if possible.. Number two doesn't do much for me I am afraid
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Postby christiand on Mon Aug 21, 2006 10:27 pm

Hi Steve,

quite a difficult topic to shoot.
Grasstrees aren't that easy to photograph :lol:
Well my experience tells me they aren't easy for me to capture :cry:
I believe the 3 dimensionality of these ancient plants is
very difficult to capture on film or digital.
I did a few shots in Tidbinbilla and I hardly managed.
The best shots were in perspective to the environment and background.

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Postby Willy wombat on Mon Aug 21, 2006 10:51 pm

Hey CD - These ones are from Tidbinbilla as well.
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Postby sheepie on Mon Aug 21, 2006 11:57 pm

Now, with the colour versions, I prefer the first one! Agree that these are bloody hard to get a decent shot of - at least one that does justice to the unique nature of these plants.
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