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Postby robw25 on Tue Aug 22, 2006 7:41 am

this was my first try at something like this and because they all had a blue background it was easy to cut and paste, maybe i have too many in the frame ?

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Postby stubbsy on Tue Aug 22, 2006 11:05 am

Rob

Well done for a first try. Not sure if this would work, but it should be easy to do: for the middle shots in the sequence, apply a radial blur in the direction of movement so only the first and last image are sharp to heighten the sense of movement. It would be interesting to see how it looks.
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Postby BBJ on Tue Aug 22, 2006 11:52 am

Rob, looks ok but i might have done away with a couple of them as it looks a bit clutered, but yeh i have not tried this but seen it and looks cool. Well done.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Aug 22, 2006 12:04 pm

I like what you've done but agree with BBJ that its perhaps a little cluttered I think it could be much improved by removing the third "frame" in the shot, I think it will make a significant different and yet still keep the flow of the rider.
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Postby robw25 on Tue Aug 22, 2006 9:24 pm

thanks for the tips guys ... i am happy with it

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Postby MATT on Tue Aug 22, 2006 9:30 pm

Rob I like jsut how it is, Very Cool 8)


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Postby makario on Tue Aug 22, 2006 10:04 pm

Looks really cool, this is the first time I've seen something like this... I agree with the other posters, maybe a little more airspace between the copy and pastes...
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