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The subject drew my attention because of its ruggedness and varied textures. I am not sure which is best, what do you think?
and colour
Do you have any of the whole building?
I'm feeling sort of cheated, because this seems to be just the middle, with no ends in sight. If that wasn't possible, I'm thinking a square crop of one of the windows might be more satisfying to me. g.
Gary Stark Nikon, Canon, Bronica .... stuff The people who want English to be the official language of the United States are uncomfortable with their leaders being fluent in it - US Pres. Bartlet
My personal opinion is neither of them
 But I'm being picky. But in seriousness I like the shot and the feel of the textures.
I like the colour one better than the b&w conversion. I'd like to see the sky all blue though and the house warmed up, I think that would really bring up the feel of it. Ooh and you've got a dust bunny on the RHS edge just above the roof
Brett
If the image's resolution will handle it, I'd go even tighter.
Perhaps just the window with some of the surrounding wall ... or try cropping this in this way ... Square ... ish Leave just two or three rows of tiles from the roof in this image, at the top. Remove everything below where the top of the fence is. Basically, kill the fence and everything below it. g.
Gary Stark Nikon, Canon, Bronica .... stuff The people who want English to be the official language of the United States are uncomfortable with their leaders being fluent in it - US Pres. Bartlet
Ok I enhanced a bit the sky colour without making too obvious.
And got rid off the offending dust bunny. Thanks again for your help.
That's more to my taste ....
But my taste is irrelevant: this is your image. What do you think of this now? g.
Gary Stark Nikon, Canon, Bronica .... stuff The people who want English to be the official language of the United States are uncomfortable with their leaders being fluent in it - US Pres. Bartlet
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