New Zealand Odyssey

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New Zealand Odyssey

Postby ozimax on Sat Oct 20, 2007 7:30 pm

Just spent 2 days in Auckland, now in Hamilton, heading south on Monday. Here's a few snaps taken with the 10-22mm lens. What a fun lens...

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Postby Matt. K on Sat Oct 20, 2007 7:35 pm

I just love white against a deep blue sky! Dramatic images and well caught!
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Postby ozimax on Sat Oct 20, 2007 7:42 pm

Thanks Matt, the Kiwis have some amazing architecture, all worth photographing.
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Oct 21, 2007 12:05 am

Love #1 and #3 here. Both are very strong images and make great use of lines. #2 fails to grab me. Possibly because the bow of the yacht leads my eye out of the frame. That said I have tried and failed to get a decent shot in that spot because it's so cramped so I understand the difficulties there.
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Postby ozimax on Sun Oct 21, 2007 12:33 pm

stubbsy wrote:That said I have tried and failed to get a decent shot in that spot because it's so cramped so I understand the difficulties there.


Funny you mention that Peter, with the 10-22mm lens it's actually hard to know what to leave out of the frame. You can almost touch the yacht and still get the whole thing in, albeit a tad distorted.

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Postby BT*ist on Sun Oct 21, 2007 1:39 pm

Lovely work with a great lens! I really like the angle of the first and the symmetry of the third. The second is good also, but in a sequence that features the other two, I think the additional ground-level details (people, singage, posts, trees), and the extra colours (particularly the reds) weaken it a bit. A diagonal crop (if that were possible!) of that shot two might make it fit in with the others.
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Postby !~DeViNe~DaRkNeSs~! on Sun Oct 21, 2007 9:10 pm

Great shots! don't waste time with the north island tho :D wait till u get into the deep south :D
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Postby ozimax on Sun Oct 21, 2007 9:14 pm

!~DeViNe~DaRkNeSs~! wrote:Great shots! don't waste time with the north island tho :D wait till u get into the deep south :D


Come come now, millions of Aucklanders will be offended! :)

Actually the north island is a supreme place for photography, especially Mt Ruepehu, Mt Taranaki etc. But yes, I can't wait to get to south island next week, especially Mt Cook region, Queenstown and the architecture of Christchurch.
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Postby !~DeViNe~DaRkNeSs~! on Sun Oct 21, 2007 9:39 pm

ozimax wrote:
!~DeViNe~DaRkNeSs~! wrote:Great shots! don't waste time with the north island tho :D wait till u get into the deep south :D


Come come now, millions of Aucklanders will be offended! :)

Actually the north island is a supreme place for photography, especially Mt Ruepehu, Mt Taranaki etc. But yes, I can't wait to get to south island next week, especially Mt Cook region, Queenstown and the architecture of Christchurch.

haha the ONE million AK'ers..also known as JAFA's Just Another F Aucklander :D:D:D

When ur in Tekapo, dont just go round the one lake. make sure u sneak around some of the smaller lakes in the area ;) Lake Alexandrina just 15-20mins from tekapo is WELL worth a visit...be sure to take a fly rod with you :D
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Postby Killakoala on Mon Oct 22, 2007 7:57 am

Great use of angles and contrast. YOu are certainly enjoying that lens and all that it can do :)
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