Boats in the night

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Boats in the night

Postby wazonthehill2 on Wed Nov 28, 2007 7:35 pm

Stopped on the way home to relax by the lake. Took a couple of shoots. Learn't more about what not to do. Even when calm, 30 seconds is way to long. ISO 1000 still quite grainy, and I have lots of room to "grow" as a photographer!

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(the heron would not stand still!)

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I like them enough to go back and try "properly" next calm night.
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Postby stubbsy on Wed Nov 28, 2007 9:19 pm

Waz

The first two of these suffer because of their size here and I won't comment on them since it's unfair to do so when i can't see the detail. #3 is excellent - great reflections and composition with strong lines. For shots like this I rarely go above ISO 400 to avoid noise but of course a lot comes down to the ambient light you have to work with since, as you say, at longer (~30 sec) exposures movement is your enemy.
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Postby Marvin on Wed Nov 28, 2007 11:35 pm

 LOL I would clone the heron out if I were you.
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Postby CraigVTR on Thu Nov 29, 2007 5:35 pm

Waz

Although difficult to see in #2 I do like the Heron, adds something surreal to the shot.
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Postby Oneputt on Thu Nov 29, 2007 6:43 pm

I really like the last but I think that the composition is off. Try a crop from the bottom.
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Postby jammy2 on Thu Nov 29, 2007 7:21 pm

#1 and #3 work really well for me personally with the symmetry of boat and reflection
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Postby DJT on Thu Nov 29, 2007 9:10 pm

#3 for me very nice pic, love the reflections
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Postby blacknstormy on Thu Nov 29, 2007 9:21 pm

Would love a link to a larger size for the shots if you can ??
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