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Brave New Future

Postby wendellt on Sat Dec 15, 2007 5:45 am

editorial for Pulp mag

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Models - Frey Mudd @ Priscilla's
Ashlee Anne @ Moda
Styling - Frey Mudd & Me
Hair & Makeup - Rani @ T.I.D.
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Postby marcotrov on Sat Dec 15, 2007 11:06 am

Another great series Wendell, however, not as evocative as your last 2 posts though i really like the first. I realise you probably meant to include the sun graffiti in the top left of frame but for me in tends to draw the eye away from main subject and natural flow of the image. IMHO the image is far more powerful with the left edge cropped to remove the graffiti and also placing the model on that magic third and I'm knit picking here Wendell. You are on an inspired roll my friend :)
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Postby wendellt on Sat Dec 15, 2007 11:11 am

yoru right marco composition aint perfect in 1 model should be moved more left, the dynamic in the background moving car doesnt really balance the image
just one of those oh darn wish could of reshoot moments

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Postby Matt. K on Sat Dec 15, 2007 1:25 pm

Wendell
Your first shot here is the standout. You seem to do best with the 'classical' look. Nice work!
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Postby PiroStitch on Sat Dec 15, 2007 7:08 pm

Excellent stuff as usual and love how the varying style of light you've applied in this editorial.
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Postby Alex on Sun Dec 16, 2007 1:44 pm

The first one is outstanding, Wendell!
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