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Another... My First Wedding

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Another... My First Wedding

Postby Jonesy on Tue Feb 05, 2008 12:43 am

Well I have made the jump and took my first wedding in January. Married at 11, reception at 12 (no time for photos) and all outside on a lovely 36 degree day. I'm happy with my results and so glad that the couple were very relaxed and easy going. (not looking forward to a BRIDEZILLA).

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Re: Another... My First Wedding

Postby shakey on Tue Feb 05, 2008 2:46 am

The B&W is just excellent. Well done. Lovely composition. The tilted shot doesn't grab me but the rest are great.
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Re: Another... My First Wedding

Postby shutterbug on Tue Feb 05, 2008 7:35 am

great pics :wink:
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Re: Another... My First Wedding

Postby Louie on Tue Feb 05, 2008 8:01 pm

I think you've done a great job and am sure the couple are very happy with these pics!

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Re: Another... My First Wedding

Postby surenj on Fri Feb 08, 2008 12:27 am

Awesome stuff.. Did you really shoot these shots with on-board flash?
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Re: Another... My First Wedding

Postby blacknstormy on Fri Feb 08, 2008 1:37 am

That b&w shot is spot on !!!! Perfect framing and exposure :)
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Re: Another... My First Wedding

Postby Pehpsi on Fri Feb 08, 2008 10:37 pm

Look pretty good to me :up:
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Re: Another... My First Wedding

Postby Jonesy on Sat Feb 09, 2008 6:17 pm

Thanks everybody for your comments

surenj wrote:Awesome stuff.. Did you really shoot these shots with on-board flash?


These were shot with sb800 on camera (the on board flash in my sig has come from my efforts in forgetting to turn it on to fire speed lights at the melbourne workshop!)
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