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Concentration

Postby Alex on Sun Jun 22, 2008 8:36 pm

This one was a set up shot, but I was surprised that my son would be so serious about pulling facial expressions.

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Re: Concentration

Postby Geoff M on Sun Jun 22, 2008 9:49 pm

I quite like this although I think it would be stronger with your son's chin in view. (tilt the laptop screen down a touch).
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Re: Concentration

Postby Alex on Sun Jun 22, 2008 9:56 pm

Thanks Geoff. Here is a little different image from the same session. It's a little crippy.

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Re: Concentration

Postby aim54x on Sun Jun 22, 2008 9:59 pm

looks like you have a good model there
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Re: Concentration

Postby Matt. K on Sun Jun 22, 2008 10:08 pm

I think image #1 is excellent and would not look out of place in a glossy magazine as an advert. It's a professional quality image.
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Re: Concentration

Postby Alex on Mon Jun 23, 2008 5:57 pm

Thanks for the comments, aim54x and Matt. Appreciate it.

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Re: Concentration

Postby PiroStitch on Mon Jun 23, 2008 6:01 pm

heheh awesome lighting :) just be wary of where you've cloned out the laptop logo though as it's a bit obvious with the smudge.
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Re: Concentration

Postby Alex on Mon Jun 23, 2008 6:26 pm

Thanks Wayne! Hard to see on CRT. Will fix that.

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Re: Concentration

Postby Reschsmooth on Mon Jun 23, 2008 6:50 pm

PiroStitch wrote:heheh awesome lighting :) just be wary of where you've cloned out the laptop logo though as it's a bit obvious with the smudge.



Yeah, Dell may not be too happy :D Great photo, nevertheless.
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Re: Concentration

Postby Glen on Tue Jun 24, 2008 11:56 am

Nice work Alex. What was the lighting?
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Re: Concentration

Postby Alex on Tue Jun 24, 2008 7:42 pm

Thanks Glen,

The lighting set up was very simple. One light with a snoot on the keyboard, pointing up at the model's face. The 2nd light was through a translucent umbrella from camera's right at ca. 45 degree angle to the subject. Ideally I would like a 3rd light to light the background a bit but the spill from the 2nd light was sufficient for that in this case.
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Re: Concentration

Postby Glen on Tue Jun 24, 2008 8:14 pm

Very effective lighting Alex, the light on the keyboard simulated the light of the screen well, so all shadows etc were correct
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