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ConcentrationThis one was a set up shot, but I was surprised that my son would be so serious about pulling facial expressions.
Thanks for looking, Alex
Re: ConcentrationI quite like this although I think it would be stronger with your son's chin in view. (tilt the laptop screen down a touch).
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Re: ConcentrationThanks Geoff. Here is a little different image from the same session. It's a little crippy.
Alex
Re: Concentrationlooks like you have a good model there
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Re: ConcentrationI think image #1 is excellent and would not look out of place in a glossy magazine as an advert. It's a professional quality image.
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Re: ConcentrationThanks for the comments, aim54x and Matt. Appreciate it.
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Re: Concentrationheheh awesome lighting just be wary of where you've cloned out the laptop logo though as it's a bit obvious with the smudge.
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Re: ConcentrationThanks Wayne! Hard to see on CRT. Will fix that.
Cheers Alex
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Yeah, Dell may not be too happy Great photo, nevertheless. Regards, Patrick
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Re: ConcentrationNice work Alex. What was the lighting?
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Re: ConcentrationThanks Glen,
The lighting set up was very simple. One light with a snoot on the keyboard, pointing up at the model's face. The 2nd light was through a translucent umbrella from camera's right at ca. 45 degree angle to the subject. Ideally I would like a 3rd light to light the background a bit but the spill from the 2nd light was sufficient for that in this case. Cheers Alex
Re: ConcentrationVery effective lighting Alex, the light on the keyboard simulated the light of the screen well, so all shadows etc were correct
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