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6.24 sunrise

Postby Pa on Tue Jun 24, 2008 5:17 pm

any feedback on this will be appreciated.....thanks

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Re: 6.24 sunrise

Postby Dave-D40 on Tue Jun 24, 2008 7:16 pm

Well i think it looks great ,love the tree branch in it.
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Re: 6.24 sunrise

Postby main identity on Tue Jun 24, 2008 8:53 pm

very nice sunrise well done
but I would lose the dead brach to distracting jmo
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Re: 6.24 sunrise

Postby glamy on Tue Jun 24, 2008 9:11 pm

Pa,
I do not think the branch brings anything to the picture and, aside from the branch, the foreground is too dark.
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Re: 6.24 sunrise

Postby surenj on Tue Jun 24, 2008 9:15 pm

I agree. Foreground seems a bit too contrasty with the branch which detracts from the nice sun rise..
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Re: 6.24 sunrise

Postby wheels on Tue Jun 24, 2008 10:45 pm

Sorry Pa, I'd lose the branch too. It kinda wrecks the wild grass shadow foreground you've got going there.
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Re: 6.24 sunrise

Postby big pix on Wed Jun 25, 2008 9:23 am

........ mmmmmmm the branch is a bit too much of a distraction.......... have you tried cropping it out, say just below the reads so there is a thin line of dark and saturate up the green leaves a bit to give said image a lift......... but still a very nice capture
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Re: 6.24 sunrise

Postby wazonthehill2 on Wed Jun 25, 2008 7:22 pm

Pa
I have many shots of sun rise/set over water with grass in front. To be honest almost gets boring after a while

I LOVE THE TREE

it mixes it up, gives a different aspect, has another focal point, it is a tree that has a nice supporting sunset.

The tree makes this shot
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Re: 6.24 sunrise

Postby silli on Wed Jun 25, 2008 9:54 pm

Me to for no branch.
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