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Movement & Colour

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Wed Jul 02, 2008 11:17 pm

Just a quirky look and shoot i did last night in the city :)

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Thanks for looking ...
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Re: Movement & Colour

Postby sirhc55 on Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:43 am

Dan

#1 - Great concept but just hate her left foot, it looks awkward. Maybe this one could be cropped up!

#2 - Love it. Motion, colour and subdued abstract shapes make this a winner

#3 - Like the concept but I feel that the lighting could have been much better.

#4 - not sure on this one
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Re: Movement & Colour

Postby aim54x on Thu Jul 03, 2008 1:35 am

#1 :agree: with hating the left foot in this one, but it does do a great job of catching the eye. CROP maybe
#2 My favourite, really captures the movement and keeps me interested
#3 Nice concept, well executed, but seems to lack something, not sure what though
#4 :agree: not sure about this one either

As always, awesome work!!! I have never seen any of your work that I havent said/thought to myself 'I have to give that a go'.
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Re: Movement & Colour

Postby wheels on Thu Jul 03, 2008 9:15 am

:agree: That foot just looks wrong :shock: I really like the rest.
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Re: Movement & Colour

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:53 am

Thanks guys appreciate the posts :)

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Re: Movement & Colour

Postby hrpremier on Thu Jul 03, 2008 5:19 pm

Dan.

Get concept and congratulations on some well thought out images. Love number 2 and 3. Cant fault either. Disagree with sirhc55 and feel the lighting in this series is spot on and packs a real punch. My take on number 4 is a believe the angle the picture is taken on is all wrong. May work if you crop just her head into the top left corner of a 4 * 6. Just my thoughts anyways.

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Re: Movement & Colour

Postby robert on Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:57 pm

the second is my pick.

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Re: Movement & Colour

Postby Matt. K on Fri Jul 04, 2008 12:34 am

Your sense of colour in this series is just perfect. Some nice technical work here, they really stopped me in my tracks. Nice work!
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Re: Movement & Colour

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Fri Jul 04, 2008 8:16 pm

Matt. K wrote:Your sense of colour in this series is just perfect. Some nice technical work here, they really stopped me in my tracks. Nice work!


Thanks mate....comments like that keep me plugin away :)

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Re: Movement & Colour

Postby W00DY on Sat Jul 05, 2008 9:16 am

Nice stuff mate... I have some better pictures of another model which I will pst soon ;) (you know what I am talking about... LOL )

Can't say there is too much, if anything I don't like about these. I like the texture you used in number 1 but would it be better if it was not over her foot? Also in number 2 I find the no parking sign a little distracting, might look better cloned out as you still get the urban alleyway feel without it.

Looks like it was a fun shoot though :)

Cheers.

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Re: Movement & Colour

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Sat Jul 05, 2008 5:28 pm

Thanks Andrew appreciate the crit :)

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