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A Few Recent Ones From Me - NSFWGlamour..
Lingerie.. Beauty.. Art Nude.. Cheers Dan
Re: A Few Recent Ones From Me - NSFWDan - definitely not safe for work.
Good stuff here again by you mate. If I were to be ultra critical, I'd say that the model's face in the 2nd image looks slightly hot, too much highlight. The background windows in the first image are great, did you set that up or was it a location you 'found' them? Also, in the fourth image, what are the lighter shapes on the models left and right shoulders? Reflections from glitzy ear rings? I find them a tad distracting. Great effort though as usual. Geoff
Special Moments Photography Nikon D700, 50mm 1.4, 85mm 1.4, 70-200 2.8VR, SB800 & some simple studio stuff.
Re: A Few Recent Ones From Me - NSFWAwww these are great Dan... the nude is my pick although her pose looks a little uncomfortable... the lighting is excellent!
The last thing I want to do is hurt you... but it's still on the list...
Re: A Few Recent Ones From Me - NSFWThe windows shot Geoff is at my house (like 99% of my images)
Thanks for the crit guys Dan
Re: A Few Recent Ones From Me - NSFW#1 - Nothing wrong with this classic pose. But, I feel that the location could be manipulated better. For example, the shaft of light on the floor from the left is distracting plus the DOF of the background could be softer to lift the girl.
#2 - Lighting is this shot is not subdued enough to make the lingerie “exciting” plus the odd angle of the background (wall? drape?) does nothing to give this lingerie mystere! #3 - Sorry Dan but this shot does absolutely nothing for me. #4 - Now this is getting more inline with your POTW shot. I feel that your control of lighting is not quite there yet. Imperfections need to be “in the dark” or conversely, lit to remove imperfections. Maybe experiment with a gobo or two. Most certainly the best of this set. Chris
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Re: A Few Recent Ones From Me - NSFWThanks guys....thanks sirhc55 for the in depth analysis of the shots
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