Pelican (on flight) at dawn.

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Pelican (on flight) at dawn.

Postby [kane] on Fri Oct 17, 2008 5:10 pm

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A pelican is a large water bird with a distinctive pouch under the beak, belonging to the bird family Pelecanidae.
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Re: Pelican (on flight) at dawn.

Postby Matt. K on Fri Oct 17, 2008 5:51 pm

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A very tricky shot in the low light. You did well to get it. I think in order to make the image 'sing' you need to brighten the pelican just a little so that he stands out from the background. This wouldn't be too difficult in Photoshop. Let me know if you want some pointers on how to do that.
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Re: Pelican (on flight) at dawn.

Postby big pix on Fri Oct 17, 2008 8:33 pm

I like this image and agree with matt K....... my only other nit would be the dark lines top and bottom on a dark image, as they conflict with other parts of the image and draw your eye away
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Re: Pelican (on flight) at dawn.

Postby [kane] on Fri Oct 17, 2008 8:42 pm

Thanks, yeah I guess he does need a little lighting up, I'll have a go in PS.
Regarding the borders, yeah your probably correct there also, it does tend to lead the eye elsewhere, thanks for feedback.
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Re: Pelican (on flight) at dawn.

Postby aim54x on Sat Oct 18, 2008 1:55 am

awesome shot!
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