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Black and white skyI am hoping for any feedback on this image. I was simply playing about and came up with this. Any comments appreciated.
larger version can be seen at http://electron-otaku.deviantart.com/art/Brushed-Clouds-black-and-white-116090362
Re: Black and white skyIt is an interesting shot and I like the BW, might it be a slightly more balanced image if just a tad more of the foregound was shown - the trees in the ground?
Canon
Re: Black and white skyThe different cloud shapes make for a very interesting image. I think it looks great in B&W. It does seem a bit dark to me though.
Steve.
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I agree, maybe showing the complete tree? Portrait format maybe to keep those nice clouds in! 2 images stitched together would be great, then there would be no loss of the current composition gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
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Yes, I think that a bit more foreground would add context. As it is, it looks there is something wrong with the framing. On the other hand, if you are just interested in the shape of the clouds, you can leave the trees out and see what appeals more to you, but I don't think it would work either.
Re: Black and white skythanks all. I will work on composition for the next one. My main aim was the sky - was trying to use the foreground to add a bit of context...but I guess I missed the composition.
Thanks for the comments!
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