Brisbane Studio Shoot...

[leek]

I was up in Brisbane this weekend and in order to avoid the in-laws I hired a studio...
Had 5 models and 2 MUAs lined up - but par for the course - only 2 models and 1 MUA turned up...

However, here are the first few images from that shoot...

First up : Lydia May... Aim: Fashion...






Please let me know what you think - what I can improve?

[darklightphotography]

I quite like the BW. They all seem a bit oversharpened, with some obvious halos. I also find the lighting flat, and would prefer to see a greater key:fill ratio.

[phillipb]

John, I'm not too sure about the arms cut off in the last two shots, but that's just me.

[sirhc55]

John, just love the third shot. So reminiscent of the 40’s, even down to the polka dot dress. The only thing missing is the cigarette holder

[leek]

Thanks for the comments so far... Here's another with the whole body cut off...