Brisbane Studio Shoot #2 - Rizz (NQSFW)

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Brisbane Studio Shoot #2 - Rizz (NQSFW)

Postby leek on Thu Apr 09, 2009 1:24 am

Here are a few shots of the only other model that bothered to turn up to my Brisbane studio shoot last Saturday... (Thanks for being a professional Rizz)...

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Re: Brisbane Studio Shoot #2 - Rizz (NQSFW)

Postby surenj on Thu Apr 09, 2009 6:28 pm

These are technically perfect.[photographic point of view] In the 3# the breast is perfect [From an aesthetic point of view] :mrgreen:

I prefer the poses in #1 and 4#.
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Re: Brisbane Studio Shoot #2 - Rizz (NQSFW)

Postby biggerry on Thu Apr 09, 2009 7:25 pm

My preference would be for #4, the framing of the face with the shawl thingy works well.
I don't particularly like the back drop in all the images, reminds me too much of school photos :lol: probably not feasible given the time, location etc, but a outdoor backdrop may alter my opinion, especially in the first.

but hey, i would not know the first thing about portrait photography so take with a large grain (clump) of salt :wink:
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Re: Brisbane Studio Shoot #2 - Rizz (NQSFW)

Postby Critter on Thu Apr 09, 2009 8:26 pm

Nice shots, but might want to try to avoid the breast augmentation scar on #2 by shooting a slightly higher angle.
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