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Cockatoo Island - PhotoSoc TripJust back from a day out with the University of Sydney Photographic Society (AKA PhotoSoc) and thought I would share some of my images from the day.
D300 + 17-50mm - f/2.8, 1/50 sec, 200 ISO (single shot - no post process) D300 + 17-50mm - f/2.8, 1/100 sec, 200 ISO (single shot - no post process) D300 + 70-200mm VR - f/2.8, 1/800 sec, 200 ISO (single shot - no post process, shade WB as I wanted the warm tone) - I dont do much in the way of portraiture but here are a few that I took any tips would be awesome. D60 + 18-200VR - f/5.6, 1/200 sec - opportunist shot Cameron
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Re: Cockatoo Island - PhotoSoc TripCameron,
In the first image ... a little less background, and a little more saturation, I think. In the third, you have the exposure and lighting just right for this image, and the warm tones suit this perfectly. Even the landscape shooting of a portrait works for this one. g.
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Re: Cockatoo Island - PhotoSoc TripI just love the last shot Cameron. It reminds me of the work of Helmut Newton.
Suggestion - a backlit man standing in the open doorway(?) legs akimber and facing the girl would give this shot star status. Conversion to B&W would also be forceful. Chris
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However, I believe the colour version is fantastic. The warm light falling on Marilyn ( ) contrasts well with the cold light falling on the environment. Whilst impossible to reshoot, my only suggestion would have been to frame her a bit further to the left. I don't think cropping would have the same effect. Regards, Patrick
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Re: Cockatoo Island - PhotoSoc TripThank guys. A crop on the first with a bit of post will make it look a lot like Peter's image, but I will have a play around with it. I am not sure what to do with the 2nd....I like it but it seems to be missing something.
I am really chuffed about the last two...I dont usually shoot people (unless it is with a gun on the computer ) and it was great to get some nice people photos. Golden hour light came early so I snapped a few. I will have a play with the cropping of the last as well. THANKS Cameron
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Re: Cockatoo Island - PhotoSoc TripI really like the last two Cam, great to see you out there and getting the portraits and people shots!
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Re: Cockatoo Island - PhotoSoc TripCameron
That last image has to be one of the finest images I've seen from you. It is a fantastic "story" pic and while I'm generally not a big fan of model shots this just blows me away. One to be VERY proud of. Peter
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Thanks Peter....I am very happy with both the last two shots..shooting outside my comfort zone and with results that I am happy with...a very rare thing. It means A LOT more coming from you guys though. Cameron
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