Peruse some Portraits of Pip

[dviv]

Apparently an alliteration area awaits

C&C appreciated

[Big Red]

the glasses through the eyes on #1 and the brief glimpse of her top detract from it i reckon ..
love #3 though ... its a beauty

[biggerry]

The first and last are great! The first one i reckon just cropping above the dress would make for a very alluring shot

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[TonyT]

I I agree with Big Red
2 Do not like the dress maybe a crop and some pp would make this one better
3 a great shot

[aim54x]

Very nice work. i have to agree with what has already been said, the first is definitely the strongest, a great portrait, the softness coupled with the glasses really pulling your attention to the eyes (a crop would be nice as well). The second is a bit strange, I dont like the bare feet and am unsure about what to do with this one. The third, whilst nice is a bit boring, maybe a tighter crop? Very nice lighting in the 3rd though.

[Matt. K]

I love your use of light in the last shot. They are all excellent images.

[dviv]

Thanks for the coments all The critique is much appreciated

[stubbsy]

David

Glasses notwithstanding, #1 is the standout here for me. The lighting is superb, you've got lovely dreamy out of focus areas and Pip is nice and sharp. The strong eye contact and natural expression round things out well.