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The Kimberley - Galvan's Gorge

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The Kimberley - Galvan's Gorge

Postby Wonky on Sat Dec 05, 2009 9:06 pm

Welcome any comments on how I could improve this one...magic part of the world.

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Re: The Kimberley - Galvan's Gorge

Postby biggerry on Sat Dec 05, 2009 9:37 pm

I remember Galvans quite well, its a short walk off the road and a real great swimming hole, i did not swim there, but the petti-coat government did :twisted:

did you ditch the camera and go for paddle?

In terms o fthe image, it appears to be midday, not the best time for waterfall scene, I think in this case you might have better off looking at isolating one o fthe aspects of this composition and going with that. For example, I do recall there is a big Boab tree up on the top of the waterfall, maybe isolating that with the waterfall might have been good.

actually after looking at it again, its a quite nice scene, what about cropping away some of the right side to draw the eye to the tree reflection then up to the waterfall?

one of the better images i got from there was big goanna on a rock... :)
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Re: The Kimberley - Galvan's Gorge

Postby colin_12 on Sun Dec 06, 2009 7:10 pm

I would at least clone out the guy on the right up near the waterfall.
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Re: The Kimberley - Galvan's Gorge

Postby surenj on Sun Dec 06, 2009 7:36 pm

No strong focus point for this one. After looking at it for a while, that's all I can decide. HTH.
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