Cockatoo Island - my take

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Cockatoo Island - my take

Postby leek on Mon Feb 08, 2010 12:28 am

For those of you who didn't attend, we held a mini workshop / group shoot on Cockatoo Island today...

I brought along 3 of my favourite models and one of my favourite Make Up artists and held a workshop on how to work with models and off camera flash...

I think that most people enjoyed themselves, but they at least produced some good images :-)

I didn't take as many shots as I'm used to... but here are a few:
A few of my first images:

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Re: Cockatoo Island - my take

Postby surenj on Mon Feb 08, 2010 12:59 am

Upto your usual high standard John. :bowdown:

Nice colour scheme on the first two. How did you make the background green?
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Re: Cockatoo Island - my take

Postby Big V on Mon Feb 08, 2010 1:19 am

They will be happy with these as you should be
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Re: Cockatoo Island - my take

Postby leek on Mon Feb 08, 2010 8:32 am

surenj wrote:Nice colour scheme on the first two. How did you make the background green?

Thanks surenj... It was green... :-) Ageing whitewash...
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Re: Cockatoo Island - my take

Postby wendellt on Mon Feb 08, 2010 8:53 am

i like the colour schemes it looks very post war
but maybe as a suggestion reduce the reds in the skintone that will improve the mood

also for next shoot with 2 models its important to have them interacting more
you can give them roles to rollplay the interaction between 2 models is a very important aspect to fashion storytelling
the models here just seem to be standing aimlessly and not interacting with each other


technically all good though
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Re: Cockatoo Island - my take

Postby ian.bertram on Mon Feb 08, 2010 1:35 pm

Bugger, bugger, bugger... I wish I was there##$$$$@!!
This looked like a fantastic day and the shots are amazing. If you ever do anything like this again I will cancel everything and make sure I can come along.
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Re: Cockatoo Island - my take

Postby biggerry on Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:18 pm

Those first two are great John, great contrast between the models and the background, also the eye contact is spot on.

its important to have them interacting more
you can give them roles to rollplay the interaction between 2 models is a very important aspect to fashion storytelling


I agree - i wish I had thought of something before hand...


I think that most people enjoyed themselves, but they at least produced some good images


yep and I hope so :)
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