Night Time Treescape

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Night Time Treescape

Postby Big V on Tue Apr 13, 2010 3:24 am

Little bit of fun tonight by the shore of Lake Bonney at Barmera..
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Re: Night Time Treescape

Postby biggerry on Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:16 pm

Nice shot, the interaction and lighting of the tree works well, i would consider some clonage to remove those stray lights.

Did you light the tree with different gelled flashes? or torches? how many exposures and did you light the tree during each one?

I wish i lived somewhere there was level of darkness to try this out! :wink:
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Re: Night Time Treescape

Postby Big V on Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:21 pm

The tree was lit with a few different coloured torches, exposures were 4 minutes each except for the starting and finishing which were 20 seconds as I wanted the stars to be stationery for those. I had thought about cloning out the distant light of the towns but in the end I did not as on the full size image it helps give the image a sense of depth as opposed to a flat tree against a flat star trail. The tree was light for around 20 seconds during each of the four minute exposures and there were four of these.
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Re: Night Time Treescape

Postby biggerry on Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:29 pm

I had thought about cloning out the distant light of the towns


nah leave those ones, they add to it, i was referring to teh wiggly torch light on the RHS and centre.

exposures were 4 minutes each except for the starting and finishing which were 20 seconds


clever! it gives an interesting effect with the single star point at the start and finish of the trails - almost like morse code :wink:

Thanks for the explanation Big V.
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Re: Night Time Treescape

Postby surenj on Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:47 pm

:agree: with Gerry's comments.

I would also try and make the ground more brown on the right as well as getting bit of lit ground on the left side.

Ingenious technique for getting the morse code! :cheers:
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Re: Night Time Treescape

Postby ATJ on Tue Apr 13, 2010 9:29 pm

Stunning effect. I'm not sure I like the morse code thing with the stars, but that's probably just me.
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Re: Night Time Treescape

Postby aim54x on Tue Apr 13, 2010 9:36 pm

Stunning photo. I love the morse code effect that you have with the stars. Great stuff with the coloured torches!
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Re: Night Time Treescape

Postby fozzie on Tue Apr 13, 2010 10:14 pm

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Re: Night Time Treescape

Postby wendellt on Wed Apr 14, 2010 12:03 am

this is a stunner
you must of camped out
how did you lightpaint the top of a tree a big ass torch or did you climb it?
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Re: Night Time Treescape

Postby surenj on Wed Apr 14, 2010 1:22 am

wendellt wrote:how did you lightpaint the top of a tree a big ass torch or did you climb it?

Couldn't one just hold a dim light there for a long time during a longish exposure (20 minutes etc)?
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Re: Night Time Treescape

Postby Big V on Wed Apr 14, 2010 1:31 am

I used a 3 watt LED torch and placed a coloured gel over it. It is really bright and has an adjustable focus so set it to pencil beam and waved it like crazy for 20 seconds in each of the four minute exposures. I am staying at Paringa at the moment with Marvin and Family. Barmera is about 40 km away so we drove there last night for a bit of a night shoot as there are plenty of these type of trees to chose from around the edge of Lake Bonney. Tomorrow night we shall try some orbs and stuff here in Paringa which is just over the river from Renmark. During the day I have been doing a bit of birding type shots and tomorrow hopefully going to an almond packaging company to do some industrial work.
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Re: Night Time Treescape

Postby DebT on Wed Apr 14, 2010 8:41 pm

Great stuff every shot has something a bit different, more in technique and your exploring your arty side really well
...and I'm just stuck at work this week - of cause I'm jealous
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Re: Night Time Treescape

Postby Nigell on Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:21 am

Very nice
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