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Sometimes you get lucky

Postby surenj on Fri Apr 23, 2010 8:05 pm

when you keep chasing the sun....

I visited the Merewether baths (Newcastle) before the daylight savings shaninagans came into force. One could cruise in at 06:40 and still catch the good light. Gone are those days at the moment. Incidently the low cloud cover caused two sunrises..... :mrgreen:

For you C & C as usual. Thanks for taking the time to look.

Cliched view from the edge of the pool
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Pool getting replenished with water
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Pump station - purple cast due to cheep cokin clone from ebay!
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This salt water pool is meant to be one of the largest around...
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Re: Sometimes you get lucky

Postby big pix on Fri Apr 23, 2010 8:32 pm

....... nice series, good exposures, colour and composition..... 3 & 4 would be my pick but all good....

I am yet to shoot in this area. Just waiting for the sun to get up a little later...... :mrgreen:
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Re: Sometimes you get lucky

Postby aim54x on Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:04 pm

Love them, it is great to see your photos Surenj. I like the purple of #3 (who said that cast on the Cokin-Clone couldnt be advantageous?)
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Re: Sometimes you get lucky

Postby wendellt on Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:33 pm

you have a really good eye and sense of balanced composition with elegant leading lines
i love the tone in the first and last

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Re: Sometimes you get lucky

Postby surenj on Sat Apr 24, 2010 4:01 pm

big pix wrote:....... nice series, good exposures, colour and composition..... 3 & 4 would be my pick but all good....I am yet to shoot in this area. Just waiting for the sun to get up a little later......

Thanks BP. I like this area because even at sunrise, there are people about. No issues on security. Also, people always come and say hi and are usually curious to have a look at the shots. Expect to see a few photogs hanging about though...This seems to be popular (and Cliched)

aim54x wrote:Love them, it is great to see your photos Surenj. I like the purple of #3 (who said that cast on the Cokin-Clone couldnt be advantageous?)

Thanks Cameron. Sometimes the purple becomes a bit too much. Anywhoo I have managed to put some substantial scratches on the filter so in the market for a color neutral 3 stop ND grad.

wendellt wrote:you have a really good eye and sense of balanced composition with elegant leading lines
i love the tone in the first and last

Thanks Wendell. That particular morning was as beautiful as the pictures show. I have boosted colors slightly though.

For anyone visiting Newcastle. This is a must visit place for a swim during the warmer months. On this particulr morning the water seemed to be warmer than the air!!!
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Re: Sometimes you get lucky

Postby glamy on Sat Apr 24, 2010 4:50 pm

I like them all for the same reasons mentioned in the previous comments.
I would like to add a comment about the Cokin "clone". I bought original Cokin GND filters when I first started and got rid of them (gave them to a member of the forum) because there were not neutral in colour... same reddish hue.
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Re: Sometimes you get lucky

Postby biggerry on Sat Apr 24, 2010 7:31 pm

Suren, that last one is a cracker, it needs to be cropped, ie have the bottom 1/3rd removed. As a pano style with that bird I reckon it will be a stunner. Great stuff getting out there early in the morning.

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Re: Sometimes you get lucky

Postby Bob G on Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:08 pm

You have done a great job taking and processing these. well done
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Re: Sometimes you get lucky

Postby ozimax on Sat Apr 24, 2010 9:41 pm

They're great. I would clone the island from behind #2 blocks if possible. The colour is sublime in these. Well done.
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Re: Sometimes you get lucky

Postby Big V on Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:17 pm

Well worth the early morning. colours are nice and subtle, water movement suits the location. Nicely done.
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Re: Sometimes you get lucky

Postby surenj on Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:41 pm

glamy wrote:I would like to add a comment about the Cokin "clone". I bought original Cokin GND filters when I first started and got rid of them (gave them to a member of the forum) because there were not neutral in colour... same reddish hue.

Hmm..That is not encouraging. I might investigate this further. I don't really want to splash out on Singh rays or anything for my use. Maybe Hitech...

biggerry wrote:Suren, that last one is a cracker, it needs to be cropped, ie have the bottom 1/3rd removed. As a pano style with that bird I reckon it will be a stunner. Great stuff getting out there early in the morning.

Thanks for you suggestion Gerry. Here it is.... :) We should definitely visit when you are around this area...

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Bob G wrote:You have done a great job taking and processing these. well done

Thanks Bob.

ozimax wrote:They're great. I would clone the island from behind #2 blocks if possible. The colour is sublime in these. Well done.

Thanks Ozi. It was very tempting but I resisted. I was expecting more suggestions to do this actually. I was initially hoping that the tone and mood of the photo would distract the viewer away from that island (Which I imagine would be not visible in high tide.... Hmm... Maybe another visit is in order?)


Big V wrote:water movement suits the location

Thanks BigV. Wishing I had ISO 25 to try and push the shutter spped down a bit... A stronger ND needs to be acquired. :mrgreen:
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Re: Sometimes you get lucky

Postby biggerry on Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:47 pm

Thanks for you suggestion Gerry. Here it is....


yeah love this crop, floats my boat.. :wink:

I love the processing on #2, somethign different and really makes the image, compositionally I feel i woudl liek to see it a bit wider or a bit tighter.. I find I get draw to two parts of the image, the first is the rail and sign, the second is the sky, I guess what I am trying to say is maybe try and isolate the main focus, in this case probably the sign. Anyway food for thought - still a great image and you got me jealous :wink:

I love the first image, great classic use of lines and a kickass sun to boot. The horizon needs to be straightened and there a few dust bunnies - buts all i can pick at :up:

We should definitely visit when you are around this area...


coming up shortly, will schedule an extra day on teh trip back down methinks :up: :up:
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