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Porticoes

Postby zafra52 on Sun Jun 06, 2010 7:11 pm

This picture is a study of the interplay of light, shadows and lines.
We can see verticals, diagonals, horizontals and curves.
I hope you like it.

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Re: Porticoes

Postby surenj on Sun Jun 06, 2010 7:38 pm

Very interesting image Zafra for the reasons that you mention!

The only niggle would be the warm tones which don't quite go with the overexposed white on the BW section. Perhaps try a full BW conversion.?
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Re: Porticoes

Postby Raskill on Sun Jun 06, 2010 8:58 pm

B&W, i agree.

Nice lines , i like the fact there is a person in rear of the image, giving it a human feel also.
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Re: Porticoes

Postby biggerry on Sun Jun 06, 2010 9:21 pm

Raskill wrote:Nice lines , i.


:agree:

definitely go the BW - i would go really contrasty :up:
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Re: Porticoes

Postby zafra52 on Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:07 pm

Thanks for the comments and as requested...

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