Some recent bodyscapes (NSFW)

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Some recent bodyscapes (NSFW)

Postby leek on Wed Jun 16, 2010 1:15 am

A few recent bodyscape images...

Normally I'd publish this sort of image in B&W, but this time, I quite like the colour...

I'd love to hear what you think...

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Re: Some recent bodyscapes (NSFW)

Postby biggerry on Wed Jun 16, 2010 10:18 pm

John, this is far from my area of expertise, so as usual, take my opinion with a ship full of salt.

In this case I reckon the choice of going colour over BW was a smart one, the skin colour is quite nice and even and it would be a shame to hide that thru BW.

The second image feels the strongest for me, I say this straight off teh cuff since my eyes got led naturally thru teh picture, i might consider cropping off just a bit on the right side. The other two I found myself lookign all over the image for a focal point or line to follow.

With such great curves I would have loved to see some of those curves and lines lead into the image rather than across the image, even if they ran diagonally. I think that would give them more depth and my eye something to follow.

The lighting is spot on imo, subtle and singular. I also like the sheen of moisture/oil on the skin, nice touch!

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