Latest offerings of my daughters

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Latest offerings of my daughters

Postby Geoff M on Sun Jul 04, 2010 5:27 pm

Here are some of the latest shots of my girls all taken with the newly purchased 17-55 f 2.8 which has not been off the camera since I bought it :D . Your C&C would be very much appreciated.

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Re: Latest offerings of my daughters

Postby biggerry on Sun Jul 04, 2010 5:47 pm

17-55 f 2.8 which has not been off the camera since I bought i
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:up:

I really like teh first, the use of the space on the left hand side makes it more interesting than just a kid portrait :up:

The second is beautifully lit, naturally almost? with two great, but different, expressions it is a real winner for the photo album.

The processing on the last does not really grab me, but that I think is more a personal preference than anything else!

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interesting title - I almost thought I was reading some 1st testament story :rotfl2: :rotfl2:
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Re: Latest offerings of my daughters

Postby PiroStitch on Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:05 pm

Very cute Geoff! Keep taking photos of them while they still allow you to :D

Out of the photos, I really like the first one as the composition is different to the other three. One thing I'd watch out for is her jumper being cropped out.

Great to see you're having fun with the new lens.
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Re: Latest offerings of my daughters

Postby Geoff M on Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:13 pm

The second is beautifully lit, naturally almost


Entirely natural lighting used in all of these shots. The only artifical light was in the first, natural window light from the left, but with the addition of a single tungsten lamp on top of the bookcase, you can see the colour cast on the top of her hair.

The first photo is shot at ISO3200, SOC noise is not too bad all things considered, but this has been cleaned up in LR3.

interesting title - I almost thought I was reading some 1st testament story


:rotfl2: In hind sight that is so true......I must be more creative with my titles!

Keep taking photos of them while they still allow you to


Strange that you say that, not so long ago they were always more than happy to oblige with the posing for photo's, in recent months its has become increasingly difficult to get them to cooperate and I have on occasions needed to resort to bribary!
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Re: Latest offerings of my daughters

Postby surenj on Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:29 pm

Brilliant! You are lucky to have semi-willing subjects!!

The only niggle I can see would be that half moon shaped highlight on the top of the head on #3.

#4 has unusual processing which is very timeless... What sort of processing did you use here? Highpass/desaturate/sepia... ? :?:
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Re: Latest offerings of my daughters

Postby aim54x on Mon Jul 05, 2010 9:54 am

Good to see more images.

#1 looks great with some nice directional light, although i would experiment with turning it down a tad

#2 a great snap there, nice even light and natural smiles

#3 one for the family album

#4 The processing works really well!!
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Re: Latest offerings of my daughters

Postby Geoff M on Wed Jul 07, 2010 9:26 pm

#4 has unusual processing which is very timeless... What sort of processing did you use here? Highpass/desaturate/sepia... ?


Processing was done in LR3. I used a downloaded preset '300 v2' as a starting point and made a few additional adjustments from there including a further desat.
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