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Re: AminaIts in the eyes!!! The eyes here are stunning....you wouldnt have anything with more emphasis on those eyes?
Cameron
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Re: AminaIts a very nice shot, the eyes are very captivating, however, and this is purely me (and subjective), the head covering scarf is just a complete turn off.
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No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
Re: AminaThank you all for the comments. Here is the reduced size of the
original and a 2nd version of the black and white as suggested by surenj... Last edited by zafra52 on Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Re: AminaIndeed an excellent shot that is reminiscent of the famous Afghan girl shot by a National Geographic photographer.
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Re: Amina
Bingo, I was thinking exactly the same! 2x D700, 2x D2h, lenses, speedlights, studio, pelican cases, tripods, monopods, patridges, pear trees etc etc
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Re: Amina
Interesting. I suppose the next logical step is to desaturate the red shoal and supersaturate the blue eyes and see.
Re: AminaNow, in the course of this exercise I found that I cannot desaturate the
red alone because there is a red reflection on the lady's face and it does not look natural. Saturating the eyes alone gives an artificial look. So, this is my best considering my limited Photoshop skills.
Re: AminaThey are just such nice eyes and so crisp ...if you are playing around give this a try OK this may not float your boat but try going back to the b/w version and layering in the colored eyes -
DebT PS the original B/W probably has the most character as a mystical shot DebT
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Re: AminaI like the 2nd B&W with the closer crop. Do try the coloured eyes, it may work on this image
Cameron
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Re: AminaI think it is a very interesting look. I think the eyes need to be brightened a bit, but it will definitely be a very personal choice.
Cameron
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