Runway Reality - ZEDUCE

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Runway Reality - ZEDUCE

Postby photomarcs on Mon Sep 06, 2010 1:48 am

Hey guys!

Had another awesome week with Zeduce shooting at the Rosemount Fashion Festival. Potential employee or what?! :P

Here are some of my wide images from the runway, something different from straight shooting in the media pit.

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Thought I'd try something different on the last one and see how that goes.
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Re: Runway Reality - ZEDUCE

Postby CraigVTR on Mon Sep 06, 2010 9:02 am

I think they are great. Very different to the usual fashion shots they give more of an 'event' feel and I could see them being used for an article with text over the empty areas. :up:
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Re: Runway Reality - ZEDUCE

Postby bigsarg7 on Mon Sep 06, 2010 10:13 am

Wow, fantastic, i love the first and the last! love the way u got the first shot, i agree about being used! can't wait to see your stuff published one day soon, you've come ahead in leaps and bounds!! very very impressed and jealous!! lol
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Re: Runway Reality - ZEDUCE

Postby Willy wombat on Mon Sep 06, 2010 10:38 am

Like them all but that last one is a standout for me. Very nice work
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Re: Runway Reality - ZEDUCE

Postby colin_12 on Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:25 pm

I reckon, these are pretty good. :up:
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Re: Runway Reality - ZEDUCE

Postby photomarcs on Mon Sep 06, 2010 8:42 pm

Cheers guys. Much appreciated for the good graces, indeed number two has had me questioning.. I have another version of which that I'll share pretty soon after I downsize it on my other laptop, meanwhile.. I was hoping that in some ways the negative space didn't look awkward, good sign so far :D cheers!!
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Re: Runway Reality - ZEDUCE

Postby surenj on Mon Sep 06, 2010 9:32 pm

Very creative Marc. Watch out Wendell....
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Re: Runway Reality - ZEDUCE

Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Sep 07, 2010 12:43 pm

Very impressed Marcus, each time you share something your trying something new or pushing yourself and the results just continue to impress. Full credit to trying sometime different to what we'd expect for catwalk style photography!
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Re: Runway Reality - ZEDUCE

Postby Matt. K on Tue Sep 07, 2010 6:15 pm

Last image is very classical...a fine shot.
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Re: Runway Reality - ZEDUCE

Postby biggerry on Tue Sep 07, 2010 11:53 pm

CraigVTR wrote: I could see them being used for an article with text over the empty areas. :up:


that part I agree with, personally the negative space does nothing for me here and they would have more impact if the model was centred, however that is purely my view :wink:

The last image works well in my headspace, the line of the lights and the faint detail of the auditorium works nicely, the only downer is the model is not looking towards the camera.
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