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War horse

Postby the foto fanatic on Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:56 pm

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Does anyone remember typewriters? How about carbon paper - I bet that's now the world's most useless commodity. :lol:
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Re: War horse

Postby Mr Darcy on Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:45 pm

You can still get carbon paper??? I want some.
We still have a typewriter or two kicking around. Not as venerable as this one though

As for the photo, I find the background a distraction. It is not appropriate for the object. Also the star picket is badly placed. It would be nice if there was a story half typed, and for that matter, a ribbon.
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Re: War horse

Postby aim54x on Tue Nov 30, 2010 9:08 pm

Carbon paper...pretty sure you can find it at officeworks or penfolds

Typewriter...funnily enough I am sure we have two in the house here, I played with them when I was younger...before we got our first computer.
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Re: War horse

Postby the foto fanatic on Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:05 pm

Mr Darcy wrote:You can still get carbon paper??? I want some.
We still have a typewriter or two kicking around. Not as venerable as this one though

As for the photo, I find the background a distraction. It is not appropriate for the object. Also the star picket is badly placed. It would be nice if there was a story half typed, and for that matter, a ribbon.


Fair points.

The typewriter was in an old newspaper office that dates back to 1869, "The Argus". It is now a tourist attraction in Cromwell NZ. Didn't have an opportunity to play with position or background, so I had to do the best I could.
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Re: War horse

Postby colin_12 on Thu Dec 02, 2010 8:25 pm

Yes you can stil buy carbon paper. We us it to transfer images or lettering onto stone for carving.
We also have several forms at work that are many pages and self carbon via impregnation within the forms.
Nice pic :cheers:
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Re: War horse

Postby zafra52 on Fri Dec 03, 2010 7:28 pm

I wonder if a similar situation, being closer to the
subject and a bigger aperture would help to blur
the background. Photoshop would be a last alternative
in my book.
I like your second picture.
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