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Factory

Postby aim54x on Mon Oct 03, 2011 8:52 pm

From yesterdays trip out to the Dunlop/Slazenger Factory

It is always great to visit this location. The artworks are constantly changing and evolving...even as we were photographing.

Straight out of camera, playing with reflections
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Straight out of camera, lines and reflections
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Fisheye + HDR = crimes against photography
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Re: Factory

Postby biggerry on Mon Oct 03, 2011 9:37 pm

aim54x wrote:Straight out of camera, playing with reflections


Definitely a winning image in my mind, the two sides of the image makes one look twice to make sure its not two separate images joined together, the image also has beautiful contrast, straight out of the blocks!

aim54x wrote:Fisheye + HDR = crimes against photography


the main thing that hits me about this image is the purple highlights in the roof holes, they do not match the reflections, me confused.
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Re: Factory

Postby aim54x on Mon Oct 03, 2011 11:24 pm

biggerry wrote:
aim54x wrote:Fisheye + HDR = crimes against photography


the main thing that hits me about this image is the purple highlights in the roof holes, they do not match the reflections, me confused.


Those purple highlights would be HDR playing havoc with the fisheye lens
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Re: Factory

Postby surenj on Tue Oct 04, 2011 8:09 pm

biggerry wrote:the main thing that hits me about this image is the purple highlights in the roof holes, they do not match the reflections, me confused.

Is this scientifically plausible to have extra purple fringing due to the higher intensity of light coming through those gaps and hitting the lens. :?:

#1 is quite interesting as it makes the eye dart around.
#4 the scene looks too detached and less engaging. Perhaps a lower viewpoint with the cans portrayed bigger?
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