Geometric reflection

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Geometric reflection

Postby the foto fanatic on Thu Dec 01, 2011 9:20 am

From the new Fuji X10:

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Re: Geometric reflection

Postby zafra52 on Thu Dec 01, 2011 10:24 am

It is quite good! I cannot help but wondering
if the reflection is natural or you created it
from scratch. If you did the latter with the
help of software, it is very well done. Either
way I believe it adds a lot of interest to an
otherwise boring image, specially as it hasn't
got the allure of colour. One more point, the
cloud in the sky is a bit too white and lacks
details so some judicial use of curves or layers
may help you in this task.
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Re: Geometric reflection

Postby aim54x on Thu Dec 01, 2011 3:43 pm

Reflections look great, but the buildings look like they are leaning forward a tad. If possible it would be nice to get a bit more detail out of the sky/clouds.
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Re: Geometric reflection

Postby Reschsmooth on Thu Dec 01, 2011 6:30 pm

Nice B&W and suits the subject, which is made interesting by the reflection. I agree with Cam about the vertical and clouds.
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Re: Geometric reflection

Postby Murray Foote on Thu Dec 01, 2011 8:06 pm

It looks very promising.

I notice there's a fair bit of moiré in blinds and fences. I don't find that a problem and it suggests there's not much of an anti-aliasing filter. It could work well for IR with an appropriate filter.
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Re: Geometric reflection

Postby the foto fanatic on Thu Dec 01, 2011 9:55 pm

zafra52 wrote:I cannot help but wondering
if the reflection is natural or you created it
from scratch.

Natural reflection. I have only done global PP such as cropping and B&W conversion.

aim54x wrote:Reflections look great, but the buildings look like they are leaning forward a tad.

Agreed.

Murray Foote wrote:I notice there's a fair bit of moiré in blinds and fences.

Yes, that appears to be the case in the smaller files. The larger files look much better.
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