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Jackii

Postby zafra52 on Sun May 06, 2012 10:52 am

One of the better photos I took last Monday

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Unfortunately my computer crashed so I am
working with very limited computer resources.
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Re: Jackii

Postby Mj on Sun May 06, 2012 11:21 am

Hey there... a couple of thoughts...

I would look at cropping both top and bottom to have her fill the frame more but leave the negative space to the left.
Then reduce the exposure of the clothing at the lap as it is taking the focus from the primary subject. I would also consider removing her legs :o . The shadowline around the ribbon is a bit strong given the rest of the shot but that might be difficult to adjust. Of course... feel free to disagree with any of the above.
Photography is not a crime, but perhaps my abuse of artistic license is?
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Re: Jackii

Postby Matt. K on Sun May 06, 2012 6:57 pm

Big, bold image with a lot of power. I agree with MJ that I think I would clone the legs out of the image to give the appearence that she is standing. It looks a little awkward as it is. It would also work well as a black and white.
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Re: Jackii

Postby surenj on Fri May 11, 2012 11:34 am

Zafra, is this a model shoot?? or candid?
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