Soccer match

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Soccer match

Postby zafra52 on Sun Aug 05, 2012 10:18 am

I like this picture because it documents something that
used to happen when I was young - no Play Station, Facebbok
or the like - just a ball and a few friends...

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Re: Soccer match

Postby Remorhaz on Sun Aug 05, 2012 11:08 am

Hi Zafra

Kids having simple fun...

I'm wondering how this would look in mono?

and if I was being really picky - cropping off the lone dangling arm on the right and getting the rest of the hand back on the left.
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Re: Soccer match

Postby zafra52 on Sun Aug 05, 2012 4:12 pm

Thanks for the comments. I didn't realised there were
an orphan arm dangling on the corner and yes the b&w
gives it an effect of a bygone era.

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Re: Soccer match

Postby Murray Foote on Sun Aug 05, 2012 5:13 pm

It has a very nice feel to it and does look as though it comes from the past.

I wonder whether it could be improved by making the children a touch brighter - you wouldn't want to take it too far but maybe theyre a bit too much in shadow. You also wouldn't want anything else to be any brighter, so I would think a channel mask in Photoshop.... Applies to the mono version as well as the colour though more to the colour, I think.
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Re: Soccer match

Postby zafra52 on Sun Aug 05, 2012 6:21 pm

Thanks for that. I just learned something new. I created a layer mask, which
I haven't done before, and adjusted the aperture, then I converted to BW.

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Re: Soccer match

Postby Murray Foote on Sun Aug 05, 2012 6:32 pm

I think that's much better for both versions and I like the slightly faded feel of the colour version. It could be in the 50s except that the motorbike is a bit too recent.
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Re: Soccer match

Postby zafra52 on Sun Aug 05, 2012 6:50 pm

Thanks for your help.
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Re: Soccer match

Postby biggerry on Tue Aug 07, 2012 10:48 pm

meh, first one all the way for me.
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