Cosmic Dawn at Long Reef...

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Cosmic Dawn at Long Reef...

Postby Remorhaz on Sun Sep 09, 2012 12:58 pm

I joined the FOCUS (NSW - Seascape & Landscape Photography) crew for a dawn and sunrise shoot at Long Reef at Collaroy on Sydney's northern beaches.

Sunrise was at 6:04AM so it was an early 5AM meet at the Long Reef Golf Club (which meant getting up at 3:50AM :(). It was then a 15 minute walk around and down onto the reef in the pre dawn darkness. Even at this time and from on top of the headland above the reef you could tell there were basically no clouds in the sky so a spectacular colour filled clouded sunrise was not going to be on the cards.

I decided to go with a bit of light painting on the reef which thankfully was near low tide leaving the whole shelf relatively exposed with just a shallow layer of water on the surface providing a mirror for the sky.

All I needed to do was find some suitable foreground interest with a good angle on the reef and sky - I found myself a relatively large undisturbed lake of water with just a single large rock in it and set to work.

This was at 5:29AM, so just over 30 minutes before sunrise, which allowed me a long enough exposure (150 seconds) to do some light painting. Shot with a circular polariser and a 3 stop hard ND grad over the sky. I lit this rock using a focused beam from a small (but powerful) LED torch I'd recently purchased for this type of work (it's powered by a single AA battery but puts out a lot of light (a couple hundred lumens) and is focusable). I lit the rock from the left side leaving the right in more shadow and then I used some blue and green EL (electroluminescent) wire to add some cosmic fire predominantly on the right and lapping up and over onto the top.

A little post processing love in Lightroom and here we have Cosmic Dawn

I'd be especially interested in peoples thoughts on this - and any comments/suggestions people would have in post processing?

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I tried a handful of other compositions, locations and rocks until about 10 minutes before sunrise but by then it was getting far to light to do this anymore so I headed towards the edge of the reef to catch sunrise and the moving water over the rocks to see if any compositions might work - there were none...

Headed back into the centre of the reef and this area of very shallow still water, the reflections and the barely exposed rock caught my eye. I tried about half a dozen different angles on this from both sides but in post processing I came back to this which was my first shot :). It looked pretty rubbish in colour but in monochrome you can see just the shapes and tones which originally caught my eye.

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A pretty light morning - only 50 shots for the whole session and only a handful even worth touching in post processing
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Re: Cosmic Dawn at Long Reef...

Postby zafra52 on Sun Sep 09, 2012 1:38 pm

They are both very good photographs, but
the first one is the winner here. Wel done!
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Re: Cosmic Dawn at Long Reef...

Postby Remorhaz on Sun Sep 09, 2012 10:16 pm

zafra52 wrote:They are both very good photographs, but the first one is the winner here. Wel done!


Thanks Zafra - for me too
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Re: Cosmic Dawn at Long Reef...

Postby aim54x on Mon Sep 10, 2012 9:21 am

I do like the first one..,.if you hadn't pointed out the EL wire on the RHS of the rock I would have missed it completely.
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Re: Cosmic Dawn at Long Reef...

Postby Remorhaz on Mon Sep 10, 2012 2:27 pm

aim54x wrote:I do like the first one..,.if you hadn't pointed out the EL wire on the RHS of the rock I would have missed it completely.


Thanks Cam - I guess it "could" have been a huge opal boulder :)
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Re: Cosmic Dawn at Long Reef...

Postby aim54x on Mon Sep 10, 2012 4:04 pm

Remorhaz wrote:Thanks Cam - I guess it "could" have been a huge opal boulder :)


I could be, but I am not sure if a reef is where you would normally find opal
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