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Vanessa RaspaLast night I was out and about, watching Vanessa Raspa and The Zombie Cats perform. A colleague of mine is a friend of Vanessa's and was taking some photos on her behalf, given the license to shoot, I took advantage and let loose with the D700 and my Micro Nikkor 105mm VR.
Cameron
Nikon F/Nikon 1 | Hasselblad V/XPAN| Leica M/LTM |Sony α/FE/E/Maxxum/M42 Wishlist Nikkor 24/85 f/1.4| Fuji Natura Black Scout-Images | Flickr | 365Project
Re: Vanessa RaspaI love the texture of that smoke in #1 Cam - very nice (you might be able to crop out that person in the lower right or at least burn them down a bit)?
#3 is my next pick and even though (and perhaps because) it's mostly gone to black I like it #4 not so much - there's eye contact but it looks unnatural I reckon and whilst I love bokeh, that orb is a bit much D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
Rodney - My Photo Blog Want: Fast Wide (14|20|24)
Re: Vanessa RaspaThanks Rodney....that orb isnt a bokeh artifact, the venue had a series of large lighting globes hanging at the back of the stage.
Cameron
Nikon F/Nikon 1 | Hasselblad V/XPAN| Leica M/LTM |Sony α/FE/E/Maxxum/M42 Wishlist Nikkor 24/85 f/1.4| Fuji Natura Black Scout-Images | Flickr | 365Project
Re: Vanessa RaspaNumber 2 and 3 are exceptional. Like Rodney, I think the last looks a little set up even thoguht it is likely to only be a chance shot.
Regards, Patrick
Two or three lights, any lens on a light-tight box are sufficient for the realisation of the most convincing image. Man Ray 1935. Our mug is smug
Re: Vanessa RaspaCameron, this series is superb. You must have found ya mojo!
#1 (especially) and #2 are looking super duper. I quite like the OOF head on the #1. You could even try BW of the first and see what you can come up with.
Re: Vanessa RaspaThanks guys! I took home 200 odd frames and culled back to about 45 frames to keep. These are some of my favourites from the night. I will have a poke around with a mono version of #1, and some crop/burn of both #1 and #2 as well. If anyone wants to have a crack at processing please post it up!
Cameron
Nikon F/Nikon 1 | Hasselblad V/XPAN| Leica M/LTM |Sony α/FE/E/Maxxum/M42 Wishlist Nikkor 24/85 f/1.4| Fuji Natura Black Scout-Images | Flickr | 365Project
Re: Vanessa Raspaall nice images cam, good atmosphere, great lighting and you have conveyed all this very well. Top stuff.
gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
Re: Vanessa Raspa#3 is my favourite of the set
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