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Postby Geoff M on Thu Apr 11, 2013 12:53 pm

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Re: Light Music

Postby gstark on Thu Apr 11, 2013 2:44 pm

Very bass-ic.

But it resin-ates with me - makes me quaver with joy. I may have to stop and catch my semi-breve.

Seriously, good use of the light, and a very nicely composed image.

Sorry. :)
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Re: Light Music

Postby Matt. K on Thu Apr 11, 2013 3:27 pm

Very effective image. Nice mixture of texture, tones and contrast. A quality still life!
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Re: Light Music

Postby Remorhaz on Thu Apr 11, 2013 5:35 pm

I like this Geoff - the only thing off for me is the edge light around the bass is - how do I put this - it's a bit too obvious so that it looks fake even if it wasn't
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Re: Light Music

Postby Geoff M on Thu Apr 11, 2013 8:58 pm

gstark wrote:Very bass-ic.

But it resin-ates with me - makes me quaver with joy. I may have to stop and catch my semi-breve.

Seriously, good use of the light, and a very nicely composed image.

Sorry. :)


:biglaugh: too many puns Gary ..... and the first is not quite on the mark as it is a cello!

Matt. K wrote:Very effective image. Nice mixture of texture, tones and contrast. A quality still life!


Thanks Matt :D

Remorhaz wrote:I like this Geoff - the only thing off for me is the edge light around the bass is - how do I put this - it's a bit too obvious so that it looks fake even if it wasn't


Not fake - as was, but I hear where you are coming from.
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Re: Light Music

Postby gstark on Fri Apr 12, 2013 10:15 am

Geoff M wrote:
gstark wrote:Very bass-ic.

But it resin-ates with me - makes me quaver with joy. I may have to stop and catch my semi-breve.

Seriously, good use of the light, and a very nicely composed image.

Sorry. :)


:biglaugh: too many puns Gary ..... and the first is not quite on the mark as it is a cello!


Which is still played in the bass clef. :)
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