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Break of Day/End of Day

Postby sirhc55 on Wed Mar 23, 2005 11:14 pm

Shot using the Nikon D1 and the 28-105mm Nikkor. No EXIF data (long gone) but I do know they were hand held.

The dawn shot was about 4.30am on arrival at a resort in Fiji and the other was sunset.

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Postby mic on Wed Mar 23, 2005 11:27 pm

Great natural colours Chris.

The only thing missing is a nice Crescent Moon.

Nice,

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Postby JordanP on Thu Mar 24, 2005 9:40 am

It wasn't a holiday was it - I'm starting to get jealous :)
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Mar 24, 2005 9:46 am

JordanP wrote:It wasn't a holiday was it - I'm starting to get jealous :)


Yes it certainly was Craig and most enjoyable. I had more camera gear and computer gear with me than clothes - I was known as ”that naked tourist from downunder” :roll:
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Postby BBJ on Thu Mar 24, 2005 10:16 am

Fantastic shots Chris, i love the second shot shows a bit more in the pic but great shots. Only wish when i was younger when i went to Fiji i had a camera as i was very young when my parents took us all on a cruise for 2 weeks on the Oriana, i spent more time in the pool as it was the only place i didn't feel sick. LOL Well done mate top shots.
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Postby SoCal Steve on Thu Mar 24, 2005 11:46 am

Beautiful, Chris. Just beautiful.
The first looks like maybe you used a graduated ND filter.
I assume that your horizon is straight on the second one. :wink:
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Mar 24, 2005 11:51 am

SoCal Steve wrote:Beautiful, Chris. Just beautiful.
The first looks like maybe you used a graduated ND filter.
I assume that your horizon is straight on the second one. :wink:


Good point about the horizon Steve - actually it is straight but I had to look for a long time to make sure it was.

The first pic had a graduated blue filter applied through nik efex pro to darken the top of the pic. :D
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Postby SoCal Steve on Thu Mar 24, 2005 11:57 am

sirhc55 wrote:
SoCal Steve wrote:Beautiful, Chris. Just beautiful.
The first looks like maybe you used a graduated ND filter.
I assume that your horizon is straight on the second one. :wink:


Good point about the horizon Steve - actually it is straight but I had to look for a long time to make sure it was.

The first pic had a graduated blue filter applied through nik efex pro to darken the top of the pic. :D


You should be feeling taller, Chris. I was just pulling your leg! :lol:
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Mar 24, 2005 11:58 am

Just went to the kitchen to brew some coffee and felt the twinge in my leg 8)
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Postby Glen on Thu Mar 24, 2005 12:01 pm

Love the second, the composition is very nice
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Postby Geoff on Thu Mar 24, 2005 1:17 pm

I too love the second shot Chris, looks like a promotional shot you'd see for the island...hmm...take me there! :)


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Postby stormygirl on Thu Mar 24, 2005 1:58 pm

These are beautiful Chris! Fiji is such a magical place.....The best sunset I have ever seen was in Fiji, aaah, the memories! Can you remember where it was exactly?
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Mar 24, 2005 2:02 pm

Warwick Resort, Coral Coast :D
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