Some images of mine...

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Some images of mine...

Postby Click on Fri Apr 15, 2005 10:46 pm

Love to here peoples views on my images, thankyou to those who have already commented (post was lost after the upgrade yesterday(?). Pls feel free to add your constructive critcisim (i have broad sholders).

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This action shot I found very difficult to get the right light for, as I only had the D70's flash (no speedlight) and it was well and truely dark. (The subject is jumping over the bin, not balancing)

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Now that you have seen the pics I will add that I have been on this forum on and off since September last year (since i got my D70). I am a complete beginner to photography & Photoshop and the D70 was my first camera. These are a few random images of mine over the last several months, i have many better yet have, understanbly, many many worse. HAHA!
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Postby Miliux on Fri Apr 15, 2005 10:48 pm

How did ya do the first one? That technique will come handy. :)
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Postby Click on Fri Apr 15, 2005 11:01 pm

Nexxus,
In photoshop use the first image/frame as your canvas.
Load your other images and lasso the subjects, then use the making tool to get a finer cut around the subject. Copy the lasso-ed subject and then paste and line it up on the original image, from each of the images.
It's really basic when you get it...
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Postby PiroStitch on Fri Apr 15, 2005 11:05 pm

I like the last one, but not a fan of the bottom shrubs. :)
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Postby KerryPierce on Fri Apr 15, 2005 11:08 pm

Those are nicely done, Click. The first B&W is my fav, but all of them are cool. There are minor points to each of them that might make them more appealing.

The B&W shots seem a notch dark, like about -.3 to -.7EV.

The sequence shot is great. Excellent post job of combining the images. :) The nitpicks are that your shadow in it and is shot from a higher perspective than optimal. Had you sat on the ground, a little to your left, you'd have probably lost your shadow and had a perspective to show more of the jumper's face, like the barrel jumper shot.
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Postby Click on Fri Apr 15, 2005 11:29 pm

Thanks for the advice Kerry,
The first B&W image i must confess to darkening on Photoshop to try and compensate for the sun being to blown out, even though I wanted to make a point of the harsh sun in the snow. But yeah i can see that the forground definitions could be lifted through lightening a touch.

When I went to photoshopped the first sequence shot I was kicking myself cause I had my shadow in the shot, eventhough I don't recall seeing it when I initially took the image.
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Postby darb on Sat Apr 16, 2005 1:11 am

the B & W shots are fantastic click ;)

its something i never have en eye for ... ie, what would look good B & W
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Postby Nnnnsic on Sat Apr 16, 2005 1:56 am

I like the first black and white most... the second black and white makes you look to the distance first and it feels more like that should be darker.

And as a side note, next time put your images in the section designated for it, "Images Reviews and Critiques," not "General Discussion". :)
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Postby darb on Sat Apr 16, 2005 2:12 am

click : you interested in a 7'6 yahoo mini mal longboard?

am selling it to get a new shortboard ... need to sell the mini mal asap!
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Postby dooda on Sat Apr 16, 2005 5:26 am

Great shots. I love the last one. I just posted a thread about the photography Showdown at the Telus World Ski and Snowboard Festival in Whistler. The shots were out of this world.
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Postby Click on Sat Apr 16, 2005 2:38 pm

Cheers for the feedback everyone!

Brad, nah mate don't ride boats mate! :lol:
Looking for another short board myself though... You back from over east yet?
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Postby darb on Sat Apr 16, 2005 5:33 pm

ive been back for ages mate, it waas only a 2 week trip

with regard to the board, i just sold it to star surf :)

ps your mobile is not working

and re short board ... myself and mate have 2 customs about to be ordered.

Aloha, full deck art, custom shortboard (polished glass etc too) ... getting em for $595 ! (anything even remotely similiar in perth surf stores is well over 700 and then some)

let me know if youre interested mate. Im getting a 6'5 swallow tail, 18 1/2, 2 1/2, standard glass, polish finish, mid size rails, single concave.

See here :

http://www.alohasurfboards.com.au/showr ... oards.html

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not sure on timing yet. The senior shaper is on long service leave. The shop we're going through is in busselton, and kicks the pants of anyone in perth, plus cheaper than going factory direct, and noone else in perth sells the aloha gear ... its a shame, extremely good shaper and glassing, aswell as a "freakshow spray artist" if youre into that side of things. The shop dude wants us to wait until the "zen lord king of shaping returns from leave" :)
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