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working on this wedding
At the moment I am working on this wedding. Taken with D70 with 80-200mm.
A great shot Vincent but a shame that the lower wedding streamer cuts through the reflection of the couple in the windscreen - this would have made a great reflective
Chris
-------------------------------- I started my life with nothing and I’ve still got most of it left
Thanks Glen, I love the dreamy effect.
sirhc55, agree with you about the streamer 
Yes, shame about the streamer, but the shot still conveys the emotion.
Perhaps you could crop slightly higher and to the left to remove the streamer & near window frame to focus more attention on the couple. The only other suggestion is if you are not opposed to further PS editing measures attain the "ideal." Her neck is a little thick looking due to straining anterior neck muscles to maintain the position. Perhaps a little Liquify tool to shave off some of that thickness either from the front or the back. Or you can try a little burning at the back of her neck. Joolz
Great work Vincent. Not sure if it's just my monitor but the photo looks a bit dark too me. I'm on an LCD and it's usually a bit brighter than what the original is if that helps.
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