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Walk on the beach
Posted:
Mon Jan 09, 2006 11:18 pmby myarhidia
Your thoughts & comments welcomed.
AP; F2.8; 1/2000; 28mm
Posted:
Mon Jan 09, 2006 11:23 pmby Geoff
THis is a lovely shot.
I like the frame you have put on it!
I would like to see it a bit bigger and perhaps cropped a little more than it is.
The black of the groom's jacket is too close to that of the background - with some gentle PPing I think this could be enhanced - maybe some curve changes.
Is this a job you did/friends!? I hope you don't mind the constructive criticism.
Posted:
Mon Jan 09, 2006 11:28 pmby Alex
Very nicely composed. I liked the colour treatment too. Suits it.
Alex
Posted:
Mon Jan 09, 2006 11:50 pmby myarhidia
Hi Geoff,
thanks for your comments. I don't mind the constructive critisism (or destructive
, that's why I post to get feedback & thoughts from others.
In this version I have taken some of you comments and softened the colour a tad.
Posted:
Mon Jan 09, 2006 11:54 pmby Geoff
MUCH better!! Well done!
Posted:
Tue Jan 10, 2006 12:09 amby shutterbug
Nice...cabarita Bay
Posted:
Tue Jan 10, 2006 7:13 amby Killakoala
The second is much better but both crops are excellent.
Posted:
Tue Jan 10, 2006 11:05 amby Nnnnsic
Could you link it to a slightly bigger one?
I'd like to see it in a bit more detail but, alas, cannot as I'm only seeing what I would say is a thumbnail.
Posted:
Tue Jan 10, 2006 11:12 amby Hudo
A very nice shot, I like the second one. Well done.
Mark
Posted:
Tue Jan 10, 2006 11:44 amby smac
The second crop looks great as do the slight changes in colour that you have done.
I love the way you have matched the frame colour to the photo. It really adds to the whole effect.
Stuart
Posted:
Tue Jan 10, 2006 11:57 amby sirhc55
I like both but in particular #1. Marriage is a long highway and the area to the right in #1 expresses this beautifully, especially the curve of the beach.
Posted:
Tue Jan 10, 2006 1:14 pmby Matt. K
Nice image and great composition. And nicely processed! My only complaint is that I have a problem with images that show the back of people. They work occasionally, but usually only when the person is so well known that he or she can be recognised from the back. I would have preferred to have seen the couple walking into the image.
Posted:
Tue Jan 10, 2006 1:33 pmby blacknstormy
What a wonderful shot - I would be chuffed with this shot if I was the bride and groom
Matt - I kind of like the couple walking away - almost like they are walking away from the present, and into the future ..... but just my opinion
Rel
Posted:
Tue Jan 10, 2006 2:58 pmby marcotrov
You have done well i really like the second image, Geoff's advice was very productive, I think
cheers
marco