Merewether Baths at night

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Merewether Baths at night

Postby radar on Sun Jun 25, 2006 12:39 pm

Hi,

I was out at the Merewether baths on Thursday night. Got a few that I would appreciate some C&C.

All were taken with D70s and kit lens.

Starting blocks, long exposure 71sec.
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Do you think I should crop out the lights of the ships at the top?

This one was a shorter exposure, only 30sec.
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Which of the two work better?

The pumphouse was nicely lit up, does the composition and exposure work?
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Comments good and/or bad much appreciated.

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Postby rokkstar on Sun Jun 25, 2006 12:43 pm

Andre,

I tyhink #3 is my favourite here, the composition works really well. I like the diffuse glow effect you have. The reflection of the pump house balances the shot nicely.
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Postby xerubus on Sun Jun 25, 2006 12:51 pm

2nd one works well for me.. what a great location!

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Postby Colcam on Sun Jun 25, 2006 12:55 pm

Andre, The first one is a little better without the ship's lights distracting the viewer.
No. 2, for my money, would have seen me on the other side of the No.5 mounting block shooting the "Lord of the Rings" mini mountain range visible in the middle background there. With that mist in the back, all sorts of magic are possible there.

I like the pumphouse shot, although the dome highlights are a bit blown out (at least on my monitor, which is possible as I am using my laptop). Good composition and an interesting subject.
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Postby Yi-P on Sun Jun 25, 2006 12:58 pm

#2 works best for me, very nice light and long exposure effects :)
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Postby daniel_r on Sun Jun 25, 2006 1:33 pm

Great colour!

#2 is the pick.

in #1 I think the ship lights are a bit of a distraction,

#3 I like the glow that the stainless steel rails appear to have, and the reflection from the pumphouse in the puddle balances everything out nicely.
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Postby antman on Sun Jun 25, 2006 1:34 pm

No 2. looks kinda spooky. Looks like they could be headstones in a cemetary.

Great effort.
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Postby avkomp on Sun Jun 25, 2006 3:08 pm

my favourite is 3 followed by 2

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Postby macka on Sun Jun 25, 2006 4:35 pm

I'm also going for #3 followed by #2.

In #3 my only gripe is that I would have liked it a little to the right, so as not to cut off the hand rail. Very cool otherwise. Well done.
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Postby radar on Sun Jun 25, 2006 6:10 pm

Thanks for all the comments, much appreciated.

Here is the first one without the lights.

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Macka, I actually was very careful in not cutting it off, but I ended up having a crooked horizon and in the realignment, lost the edge. It was bugging me too, I'll go back and see if I can recover. I'll also see about recovering some of those highlights, bibble has a feature to help with that, time to try it out.

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Postby glamy on Sun Jun 25, 2006 6:11 pm

For me it is also #2 and #3. Good work.
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Postby PiroStitch on Sun Jun 25, 2006 7:45 pm

All great and very atmospheric shots and I prefer the first pic with the lights cropped off. The ship lights are too distracting
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Postby Ronza on Sun Jun 25, 2006 8:53 pm

#2 and #3; really great mood. Love them, what a great location.
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Postby Marty on Sun Jun 25, 2006 10:38 pm

Great night shots,
I like #3 then #2.
Colours in #3 are very nice.
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Postby jethro on Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:10 pm

No 3 is a great shoot with great atmosphere and composure
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Postby huynhie on Mon Jun 26, 2006 8:29 am

Nice ones Andre. Your second attempt of the first image is the best of the bunch for me.
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Postby Glen on Mon Jun 26, 2006 10:00 am

Andre, very nice like them all except the version with the ships lights
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Postby firsty on Mon Jun 26, 2006 2:09 pm

the pump house is my favorite, great composition
I like the coloring and the exposure on this shot
I think you should try and get back to this shot with the tide in so you get the misty water effect with the walkway and pump house floating in the mist
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Postby chet on Fri Sep 01, 2006 5:08 pm

Magic shots, just stumbled upon these now.

I wanted to know, are these baths operational, or abandoned. The photos have an errie, abandoned feel to them :wink:
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Postby norbs on Fri Sep 01, 2006 5:17 pm

I love the cropped version of number 1. Very nice indeed.
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Postby avkomp on Fri Sep 01, 2006 5:59 pm

the 3rd one is great

well done!!

also prefer the first without the ship lights.
they are a definite distraction.
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Postby wisie on Fri Sep 01, 2006 7:03 pm

Fantastic composition in the third! The idea is perfect with how you have captured the reflection! Fantastic idea as it makes the image.
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Postby radar on Tue Oct 03, 2006 11:40 pm

thanks for the latest comments, was away for a few weeks, so didn't see them till now.

Chet, these baths are very much operational. It wouldn't be very easy to get a swimming lane in summer. 8) The photos were taken in winter and at night, not too many swimmers then. However, they do get used during the day in winter even, brrrrrrr.

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Postby chet on Wed Oct 04, 2006 12:56 am

Ah right! Well you've done well in creating an uber-errie look - nice work.
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