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Photo critique

PostPosted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:11 pm
by dreams
Just sharing this shot. this is what i did for my uni projects, i had to write about 2000 words on the composition :shock:

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.Peter

PostPosted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:22 pm
by beetleboy
Hey Peter..

I like it. I like the attention detail; the feet turned in, the general treatment. It's very good. The only niggle I have is the line of light on the girls face, once you notice it it keeps distracting!

The framing with the barcode etc also adds an interesting element - was there a purpose behind it? I'm guessing you explained it somewhere in your 2000 words, just paste it in here!! :lol:

Where are you studying?

PostPosted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:30 pm
by dreams
beetleboy: thank you :). i didnt point out the line on the face was distracting, maybe i should hey and adds another 20 words to the report lol. i just do what i usually do with the border and stuff and helps alot in the report explaining it :D cheeky me.

i study in UniSa magill, are u a student also?

PostPosted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:36 pm
by beetleboy
Ah, Magill Uni - you lucky bugger!! I hear the Male to Female ratio is very unbalanced there (or at least it was when I did my Bachelor of Vis Comm at UniSA City West)!!!

I finished my studies in '01. Working in a Commercial Studio in Norwood now (not far from your campus!)

PostPosted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:51 pm
by Yi-P
Very impressive and detailed I must say.

Now you've written down 1000 words, post the next pic to complete your 2000 words :D