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Opera House abstracts

Postby rokkstar on Mon Jan 17, 2005 12:39 pm

Hi guys,

I set myself a task of photographing a series of the opera house in new views and perspectives. I'm a newbie to Aus so its something I photograph every time I pass it but I wanted something different. Also the challenge 3 helped me pick the angles.

I would appreciate your comments on these.

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All images taken with the kit lens and all have the levels tweaked in PS.

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Postby sirhc55 on Mon Jan 17, 2005 1:48 pm

Technically and personally I could find no fault with these photos. What I will say is that I have lived with this object for the past 32 years and have not seen the angles that you have portrayed before - new eye - a new perspective - well done I like them :)

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Postby MHD on Mon Jan 17, 2005 1:49 pm

I like the fourth one... The geometric shapes of the tiles is ofset nicely by the organic shape of the cloud... very nice
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Postby the foto fanatic on Mon Jan 17, 2005 1:51 pm

Refreshing angles and composition.
Unfortunately, a few of the pix have hot spots (hard to avoid, I know) which detract from them.
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Jan 17, 2005 1:58 pm

Like MHD #4 does it for me for pretty much the same reason. I'm amazed you can get that close with the kit lens. Is this a crop?
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Postby rokkstar on Mon Jan 17, 2005 2:26 pm

Thanks guys,

None of them have been cropped. As I say, the only enhancement has been with the levels.

#4 I was standing right next to it leaning on it looking up. My favourite is #5. If only there had been clouds in the scene it would have been a winner.

Thank you for your compliments on these. I'm going to use these then as the springboard for the "Different Perspective" challenge.

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Postby rokkstar on Mon Jan 17, 2005 2:34 pm

when i say none of them have been cropped, by that I mean that they arent a smaller section from a larger perspective. they have been trimmed to get rid of some distractions.
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Postby christiand on Mon Jan 17, 2005 10:17 pm

Hmhhh...

I can't see any images.

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Postby stubbsy on Mon Jan 17, 2005 10:20 pm

[quote"christiand"]I can't see any images. [/quote]
Neither can I, although I could earlier today at work. Maybe a server is napping
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Postby rokkstar on Mon Jan 17, 2005 11:01 pm

Sorry dudes, not sure what's happened there. They are up again now.

I should have kept some of these back so that i could enter them into the challenge. But at least it makes you take more pictures which is what its all about.
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