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A picture from the cemetry

PostPosted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 1:56 pm
by MATT
I went for a wonder around the local cemetry here is one pic I took


Image

Its been cropped and auto levels in Photoshop.

I dont know if I like it or not.Kinder like it having no head

Bigger here
http://matt4004.fotopic.net/p11444967.html

Taken with the 50 1.8.

Feedback appreicated

MATT

Hi

PostPosted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 2:24 pm
by yeocsa
I like the contrast and sharpness although the background is a bit distracting.

PostPosted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 2:34 pm
by JordanP
subject matter dosent overly excite me but I like the detail in the image - its sharpe, good depth of field and 9/10 for the backlighting - well done

PostPosted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 2:42 pm
by ajo43
why is everyone hanging around cemetaries lately???

Nice sharpness but I agree the background is distracting although you've done well with the DOF to limit this.

PostPosted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 3:32 pm
by sirhc55
ajo43 wrote:why is everyone hanging around cemetaries lately???

Nice sharpness but I agree the background is distracting although you've done well with the DOF to limit this.


We hang around cemetries coz you don’t have to get consent forms filled out :wink:

Nice pic - shame about the head and vandalism but it does make it interesting

PostPosted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 9:14 pm
by MATT
Thanks for the replys,

I will have to watch the background, it was something I realy did not put much thought into.

Here is another.

Image

bigger here
http://images4.fotopic.net/?iid=ystezt& ... &nostamp=1

I missed the mother sign being sharp, that was what I was after .

MATT

PostPosted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 10:28 pm
by genji
i like the 2nd image, better composition and tells a story.

with the 1st image, maybe if the statue was a silhuette with the sun setting behind, would make for a image with impact.

PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 9:09 am
by ajo43
Love the second one.

It makes me think of Norman Bates from Psycho. The only thing i would change is that the frame looks like it is not totally leve.

PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 10:40 am
by jonnydee
I like the second one as it tells a bit more of a story. Have you thought about making the first one black and white, and maybe adding a bit of grainyness?

I also agree with ajo43 in that the frame is a bit wonky.

Jon

PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 10:49 am
by MATT
I'll give that a go with the first one jonnydee will see hoe it turns out.


ajo43 yep your right not level, so many things to think of when taking a pic.

Thanks for the feed back

MATT

PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 10:55 am
by MATT
jonnydee,

do you think this is to much?



Image




MATT

PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 2:06 pm
by dooda
It's fun to play with depth of field. When I first got my 50mm1.8 I was shooting everything wide open as it was a luxury I didn't have before and I loved the boke.

In watching the same in other pictures (and going back through my own), I realize how easy it is to open way too wide and exaggerate the effect instead of making the effect more subtle. In any case, that's what I think about the second one. I really like it, but I think that blur should be done gentler as it distracts from the story as opposed to helping tell it...make sense?

I think that the B&W on the second is nice because it exaggerates the pleasant highlight around the edges of the statue. Good job in catching this unique subject. That's a good eye.