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Someone's Smiling...

PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 8:59 pm
by Geoff
I haven't posted an image in a while and this one I quite liked from a recent shoot I did. At the client's own home, against a pure white wall, using a light/brolly setup, triggered by the SB800. I know the little fella's feet are cropped off (in camera) but I don't think this adversely affects the shot. Comments welcomed:

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 9:23 pm
by stubbsy
Geoff

This is a good image but it could be a great image with a touch more work IMHO. For me there is a touch too much brightness top left and a touch too much shadow bottom right. I've taken the liberty of a quick tweak. Grad ND filter diagonally across the image (Nik Color Efex) but I painted the effect out on the baby's face and the mums arm and hairline. Then a slight dodge top left as well. For me this give a much more even light whereas before the hotspot top left drew my eye there. I finished with a slight curves adjustment. If you no likey says so and the image is gone :wink:

If it's there in your original I'd try to bring back some detail in mum's right breast too as it's a little blown out

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 9:27 pm
by Geoff
Peter,
I like what you have done here and I will attempt some of the same on mine. Appreciate it :) Thanks for the feedback.

PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 2:37 pm
by Bindii
I also like it and think that Mum will be well chuffed to tell you the truth.. a good edit by stubbsy too... I would almost consider cropping it in a little tighter and cloning a catch light in Mum's eye to make it pop more... :)