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Morning at Dee Why

PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 12:19 pm
by Reschsmooth
I had to race out this morning at about 5:20 am to take some photos for work. I only had about half an hour to create the pano and play with one other photo before I had to get ready for work.

I wish I had a ND filter (even my polarising filter) with me so I could go for slower shutter speeds, however, this is the first:

Is the concrete repair at the bottom of the image distracting?

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This is a 7 hand-held shot pano taken with the 20mm lens and quickly stitched using the Photomerge function in CS3. I would like more time to play with this one to bring out more colour from the clouds and perhaps lighten up the foreground a touch.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 12:36 pm
by dviv
Nice pictures Patrick,

I really like the look of the first one but it looks a tad soft on my monitor - any chance of a slight sharpen?

PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 12:38 pm
by Bindii
Seeing as you asked.. yes I find the concrete repair distracting... but that should be easily fixed with the healing brush/clone tool I would think..

I also think that you did a cracking job for such a short time.. the second one is my pic ... the colours are superb! :)

PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 12:40 pm
by bwhinnen
I like the first better than the second, but I'm a sucker for those pools on the shore line, so much opportunity!

I'd like to see a tad more contrast in it, and to be honest I wouldn't have noticed the concrete repair if you hadn't mentioned it.

Brett

PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 12:47 pm
by Reschsmooth
Thanks for the feedback guys. Sue, I may apply a grad ND filter in PP for the pano to see if I can get more detail and colour out of the foreground.

The softness in the first comes about due to the B&W conversion I used - this was totally intentional. :D This also explains the relatively low contrast. In fact, I would have liked to go for an even softer look but I couldn't reduce the contrast much further.


Cheers

PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 12:55 pm
by bwhinnen
If the dreamy look is what you were looking for Patrick you've achieved it on the first. I do like that image!

PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 1:31 pm
by Reschsmooth
bwhinnen wrote:If the dreamy look is what you were looking for Patrick you've achieved it on the first. I do like that image!


Sounds a bit girly, doesn't it? Thanks for the comments.

Actually, I am a little disappointed with the composition of the first as I would have preferred to be a bit more to the right, however, I don't have an underwater housing for the D200 :D

PostPosted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 10:00 am
by Reschsmooth
Adding to the previous images, here are a couple more variations of a theme.

I would appreciate any feedback on these...

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 11:37 am
by colin_12
You have done well to get the wavws looking even in the pano shots.
#3 grabs my attention more than the others though.
Regards Colin