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Ivory China & Egyptian Linen

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Ivory China & Egyptian Linen

Postby SteveGriffin on Mon Nov 05, 2007 9:37 pm

I started to have a play at a challenge entry on the weekend. This challenge is really a test I lighting IMHO.

C&C please

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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Nov 05, 2007 9:38 pm

It's very white :)
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Postby Oz_Beachside on Mon Nov 05, 2007 10:14 pm

your lighting lost the shape of the height of the bowl, it made it very flat. perhaps have the main light a little lower and to the left...

what about something in the bowl, on its own... like a corn flake or a strawberry... or a piece of chocolate...
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Postby Matt. K on Tue Nov 06, 2007 5:14 pm

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A bunch of mushrooms in that bowl and you would have had a winner! :D
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Postby SteveGriffin on Tue Nov 06, 2007 9:49 pm

A bunch of mushrooms in that bowl and you would have had a winner!

Is that a promise :?: :D :D :D
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Nov 06, 2007 9:51 pm

SteveGriffin wrote:
A bunch of mushrooms in that bowl and you would have had a winner!

Is that a promise :?: :D :D :D


Don’t listen to Matt, he is after a bribe 8) :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby SteveGriffin on Tue Nov 06, 2007 9:57 pm

Don’t listen to Matt, he is after a bribe


Hey I am OK with bribes - business as usual isn't it :shock:

Would you like the stems on or off :idea:
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Postby zafra52 on Thu Nov 08, 2007 8:09 pm

I supposed something like this wouldn't make the grade either? :wink:

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Postby SteveGriffin on Thu Nov 08, 2007 9:43 pm

Way too cheesey :!: :!:
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